When a noise wakes up Rarity in the dead of the night she is forced to go down and investigate it against all of her fears. Soon she is forced to make the hardest decision of her life in a split second.
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I really liked this story, it is full of suspense and good motivations.
The only thing that i would suggest is to specify that the characters are all humanized to avoid persons who specify that ponies doesn't have hands but hooves.
4484652 I think the "Human" tag and the fact that the story doesn't use pony adjectives would be enough to let the readers know it was a human story.
Nice ending!
Great story!
But I don't think it should be tagged Tragedy. The man was the antagonist, after all.
Amazing story
Alright, I doubt you're ever going to see this, but there is one huge error that ruins the whole thing.
If Sweetie is locked in her room, how did she get downstairs?