Fluttershy has always been a quiet, timid mare; or at least that's what her friends had always thought. After a visit to her mother's house Rarity discovers something about Fluttershy that she had hoped would remain secret. How will her friends react when the cat is let out of the bag?
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Damn, as IF I could not hate Rarity enough, holy BUCK, I would be FURIOUS if I was Fluttershy's mother, GODS damn, I would have kicked Rarity off the cloud so hard if I was Rainbow Dash, honestly something like this should not have ended so happily.
I would say it had a bittersweet ending but it did not have that feel. Shit, that's just cruel of them, this was impressive, really needs to be more edited out and looked over carefully again but all in all a very great idea, really well thought of, I enjoyed it and you did a great job, might I suggest making an alternate more realistic version of this story though, not everypony would have been so accepting, no matter how 'strong' their bond of friendship, that's not real life.
But GODS DAMN it if I'm not amazed by this, could have also been longer as well but it is what it is, great job my brother, really impressed
3187326 Yeah I suspose I could have made this longer, but I just wanted to make it a one shot
3187351 I understand bro
That... was NOT what I was expecting...
Great story!
First of all, I love his/her name being Butterscotch. It fits her so well. Second, that suprise twist made this story so wonderful. I just want to thank you for writing such an amazing story.
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