Spike, now 18, has come to realize that he can't stay in Twilight's castle forever. He decides that it's time to finally move out. Twilight, however, seems to have trouble accepting this. After raising Spike for so long, is she able to let him go?
Update 6/12/2014: I've done some editing to touch up some grammar errors and tidy up the dialogue a bit. No drastic changes but hopefully the little tweaks will make the story easier to read.
A nice sweet story about two people learning to how to cope with being apart, no matter the extent.
4483559 Pretty much hit the nail on the head. Glad yo enjoyed it.
Who who, translation- awesome
4485214 Lol thanks!
Quite nice story!
Lovely story. Very charming. I give it a 9 out of 10
4697862 Thank you very much!
How did I never see this before?!
Very cute little story. Not much in the way of conflict, and honestly it could benefit from a bit more narration, but all in all, a nice tale about Spike growing up.
5025787 It's true I did rush it a bit. Maybe I'll make an extended version someday.
Very cute story. Nicely done. The only problem is that there's more dialect than story, but I enjoyed this.
5883589 I've always been better with dialogue than the actual narrative part. It's a flaw I'm trying to work with. Although to be honest, I would prefer more dialogue over large amounts of just text but that's just me. Glad you liked the story.
Me at the beginning :
Me at the end :
Nice work!