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They say that whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. If you found a way to actually kill a gun, would you shoot bullets out of your hands? Cause that would be awesome.
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Please don't hate me for this.
Because Luna is gonna go through some pretty terrifying stuff in this.
Good start here, very atmospheric. Can't wait for more
18983Don't Worry This Is Very Awesome,You Got Potential
PS:This Is How Luna Game 5 Should Be
It's nice to see some positive feedback.
to be honest i was half expecting 'U MAK LUNA CRY, 1 STAR'
It's gonna be a while before chapter 2 though, so just hang in there.
My author ensures me he will get this done before the holidays.
what is the name of the game your talking about
19295 It's straight up called Luna Game
you can find them on Equestria gaming, But I do not recommend playing them.
That atmosphere
Defiantly tracking this!
At first I thought this was just a oneshot. You can't imagine how happy I am knowing that there will be more!
I especially enjoyed the way you slowly took the atmostphere from "vaguely unsettling" to "OH CELESTIA NO" instead of cracking open the full-on-terror in the first paragraph like a lot of horror stories tend to do. Gives that feeling of anticipation, and, after all, "nothing is scarier." The one suggestion I feel necessary to make, though, is that some of the more horrific images don't really get the description they deserve. Pillars made of pony body parts sure are scary, but we don't really get to hear enough about them to feel any way about them aside from "Yup, that's scary, all right!" Same with the "partygoers," though in that case my mind was twisted enough to come up with some pretty scary images. Still, though, it could be even more terrifying if you went into a bit more detail.
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Thanks for the criticism.
I think you'll enjoy chapter 2, when my author finally finishes it.
And now we wait for hate comments.
I hate this... being the latest chapter so far, please continue!
how come am never scared of shit like this
this shit sucks so fucking much jesus christ
actually I'm kidding it's cool
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It's completely normal, Mr. Hopper. You just stronger willed than most people.
I personally would worry if it did actually scare you. It's just a story.
Lots of cursing
It hurt 'Shy's soul ;-;
Wow. That scared me. Note: Don't look behind you...
And it just keeps getting more fucked up from here folks.
Hope that wasn't too much of a spoiler...
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger, even if it takes several lifetimes' worth of fucked-up shit to do so. I love stories like this. Thought the game was stupid as hell, but you've managed to redeem it into a surreal horror story. You should be proud of yourself, most horror stories not named Silent Ponyville suck balls because they're all about cupcakes and have no plot whatsoever.
Take five of these stars, and next time don't wait so fuckin; long to update.
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sorry, looks like you're gonna have to wait for a few ... I'd say, weeks.
Thanks for the stars though.
To anyone who intends to offer criticisms or what-have-you, I'm the writer of this story. And sorry to those of you who are looking forward to the next installment, but it's going to be two weeks at least. I've got other projects to work on.
Jolly good read!
This was pretty nice, too bad it was cancelled
UNCANCEL THIS STORY!!!
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Sorry, I just don't have anything for it. Neither does the guy I had that actually wrote it for me.
If it's any consolation, Luna game 5 is coming out soon, the one made by the real author.
Oh well.