Living alone in a world full of ponies is tiresome sometimes, thankfully it isn't that kind of story, with the aid of his 'uncles' and his new friends perhaps he can live in this new home of his, and perhaps find love.
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People who don't comment on why they dislike stories, aren't consider to be people at all, instead scientific discovers proofs they are in fact a species call trolls, who are hail of the lands of stupidity and haters. It's actually a sad place to be, word is that they always have things to say, but rather take the child route and just either hate something for no reason, or hate just because what they like is totally different from the people who make things. Like this story.
You know if anyone, or anypony is feeling uncomfortable about this chapter. That's fine, in fact it's somewhat natural. But that's a bit of a problem. Because if you're going to assume, from what I can tell from the silence, is that I'm going to block your comment, do something unmatured and be a brat. Then you're wrong. In fact, I want to hear your opinions, I want to hear what you have to say of this chapter, otherwise, what in the name of all that is holy, insane, and awesome am I going to think when you all just stay silent. You talk time to time on here and given your opinions. In fact, due to your opinions and criticizing it helped me out, and now all of a sudden you just stay quiet because of religion?
Nope, not happening. I want you to tell me how this chapter is, because either way this silence is depressing enough. Now don't worry, I'm not going to get mad if you dislike the religion, in fact that's your opinion which I will respect, I'm not trying to force it either, it's simply because it's what I believe, so go ahead and give your opinions, because in the end of the day, that's what matters to me. Knowing how you all feel and giving me an idea of what you thought about this story when you're finish with it. And I promise I'm not going to go into MUCH detail of the whole thing and only do basic things. Don't worry, you know when and what I'm talking about.
But seriously guys. JUST FREAKING SAY WHAT YOU FEEL ABOUT THIS CHAPTER! BY THE SON, CELESTIA, LUNA, AND GREY! IS IT THAT HARD TO UNDERSTAND?
*Out of breath, breaths in and sighs* Sorry about that, it just that this silence been bugging me for quite a while now.
Oh and if you all have too much to do and with RL stuff, then you can ignore this comment. Just saying.
I like it
~JFK
4873688 THANK YOU! *Cough* sorry about that, it just that I haven't heard a word about it since I post it up. It's a bit irritating and troubling at the same time.
Oh i just read it 30 minutes ago.
~JFK
4873779 Still, it's better than silence after all.
4873782 You know what sucks is fimfiction.net sometimes don't tell you if story update in till a couple days later.
~JFK
4873791 Yeah, Unless you go to that world button thing at the top next to you mail when they post something of a new chapter on the fav stories you have. That or keep looking for every two hours, but that's a bit unhealthy.
4873796 yeah I know so when you gonna update that fallout story.
~JFK
4873804 It's going to be a while, but maybe two weeks, tops. School is getting ready for me and I have to get adjusted to it soon. That and finding a way connect to the dots in the romance department for it.
Ah good to know thx
~JFK
4873813 The pie? Well I don't know about that.
(When you said 'good to know the, I couldn't resist finishing it for you.)
4873821refresh plz I just edit it thx
4873832 Sorry, like I said, I couldn't help it.
4873851 oh don't be sorry I I'd like the joke
4873863 yeah.
I'm sorry. I just have to comment on this before I continued reading this story. That scene between you, Zero, and Pinkie was hilarious. And where is Zero from if he is 'The Greatest Fourth Wall Character Ever'?
Now that I finished the story, I will comment. So, the spell on Grey is going to start to wear off soon? Hopefully, he will find true love before the changelings get him, or the women that kidnapped him originally. I have to ask one thing though. If the Princesses were having so much trouble finding Grey somewhere to live and work, why not Ponyville?
there r a lot of places that the word tell is not needed and should be replaced with said
5564035 Hmm, thanks for your imput, also since this is a present tense story, it would actually be call 'say', but that just me nicpicking.
I LOVED IT A;LL IT HAD ME CRAKING UP SO HARD MY CHEST HURTS AND I LOVED THE SONG!!!!!!!!!and I loved pinkie and Zero part the most.
6937569 *happy chuckle* well at least I know I'm doing something right.
Well, I tried, but i had enough. This story need editor. The dialogs are mess. I was forced to read some paragraph several times, because of lack of form in this story. And the story is not that great. Average Joe have "free out of jail" cards, which are infinite. Not real strugle. Not real plot. Combined with poor wrting style is just bad. I will not downvote, because after all, it doesn't deserve it. But I can't recomend this story. I was wondering, why story with these many catchy tags has so few likes even if it was from 2014. Now i know. It is just bland, boring, poor writing style. It pains me to drop this, but i can't stand reading it more.
You ruined it. You ruined it and I'm leaving.