Living alone in a world full of ponies is tiresome sometimes, thankfully it isn't that kind of story, with the aid of his 'uncles' and his new friends perhaps he can live in this new home of his, and perhaps find love.
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So far, so good. Gabe is adjusting quite well. Though the princesses may want to have a word with their guards and Discord. Discord mentioned the extra magic on Gabe and Thorja talked about him running around the night before.
I get the general gist of what you are saying, but there are a few mistakes.
'as he sees the sun setting down and the moon coming up.'
'are you suppose to be?'
'Didn't really hear about you in the old man's class earlier'
The 'is' doesn't belong.
There are more, but these are the ones I remember. Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.
4508745 Thanks for your input and the errors, honestly I didn't see them from the lack of coffee I had earlier. I hope you don't mind 'borrowing' the ideas you just give me, about the one the princess's are talking with both Discord and the guards, hopefully they'll shut their mouth before they do something stupid.
As for him taking it well, he had to go through much more crazier things with his uncles, so this somewhat tame compare what he had to go through, even with the magic. Sure he's on another world, sure he found out that he can never return home, sure he can't remember what happen, but at least he's not living with one of his uncles, preferably Zero.
Or Sohm, because Sohm's...Unique in a way.
4508787 I don't mind at all. Happy to help.
4509817 Thank you.
How long will it take before Blueblood is introduced? I'm guessing that the moment he comes into the spotlight things will ...go down south to say politely.
4512105 Actually it is, the Princess are trying to make sure he gets nowhere near Gabe, and the reason for that will be show in the next chapter.
that was a awesome read.and this chapter had me cracking up.
You could have made a great rhyme in the chapter title if you tried. "The guards of night and day, here to watch you in a non creepy way."