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Azulthedragon


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Luna and Celestia's rule have come to an end as predicted by the themselves. They willingly and happily took the gift of rest after teaching and ensuring that Twilight knows how to rule.

As the new leader of the land, she spent her time filling out papers and tending to her royal duty, such as raising and lowing the sun and moon, thus depriving her of time with her friends. Her magic skills have surpassed both princesses combined already. Equestria loves it's new ruler. There is not one pony that detests her. Twilight has brought peace and harmony to the land.

Though. Even the happiest and most beloved leaders face hardship. Here is The Princess Twilight Sparkle's story as ruler. Beginning from her first day.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

ill fav it and i really hope to see an interesting story

She smiled lightly as the unicorn stopped crying,

Shouldn,t it be the former unicorn?:duck: Besides, good story so far.

I really like it so far! It has a serious tone, but enough humor to balance it out.

Awesome. :yay:
It's a good start. I am no writing critic by any definition of the word, but I enjoyed reading it, so awesome. :rainbowdetermined2:
Always happy to add another fic to my favorites.
By the way, you may want an editor for this. I saw several typos. Certainly not enough to really distract me from the story, but present nonetheless.
I can't say I have ever edited before, but if you are willing to put up with my ineptitude, I could try.

4464632 Or alicorn? I made the same mistake in my story...:rainbowlaugh:

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As sad as it is our cute unicorn Twilght is no more.:raritycry:

Comment posted by Lady Grey deleted Jun 8th, 2014

We need more chapters soon. :fluttershysad:
I want to know what happens next.

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