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Xinamar


I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING!!!!!!!

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Ever since I was born, I’ve been different. I am the only pony on record to have been born with their cutie mark after all, a single silver coin with some kind of inscription on it. So, before I was even born my destiny was already written, but for what? The mark itself doesn’t make sense to me, and the other abnormality I possess doesn’t exactly help explain anythin’ either. Speakin’ about it, I actually don’t have any control over it. It just happens. To simplify it really, I age at a much slower rate, six times slower, approximately. This also includes my mental capacity. So in turn, I didn’t exactly have a very easy goin’ childhood. By the time I had the body and mental abilities of a ten year old, sixty years had passed… along with my mother. So I was on my own, forced to face the world and try to survive in it...
It’s been seventy-two years since then and you know what, lookin’ back, I don’t regret any of it. The starving, the fear of what tomorrow may bring, nothin’. Because it all taught me somethin’, in order to survive you need a bit of courage, skill, wit, and a hell of a lot of luck. But… if you want to live, you need that touch of curiosity.

- Eli


Notes:
This story does contain profanity and low amounts of gore related story descriptions. Reader discretion is advised.
Will be consistently be edited and revised. Thanks to my editor Joyous Apple for all the help.
Cover art is finished. Credit goes to Zibonai for the commission. She does awesome work. Thanks for the help, Z.
Also, not gonna lie, I am not entirely sure what direction this story is going. I have an intended ending but the idea on how to get there is alluding me... So yeah. Thanks for your time if you do read this and I will update as much as I can.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 12 )

4440164 Thanks Vidz!!!! :derpytongue2: Hope your story is goin' alright.

4462195 YAY!!! Thanks _Vidz_, hey so where exactly are the errors so I can fix'em?

Haven't done anything 'cause college takes priority but I am working on chapter three just very SLOWLY... like painstakingly. Alright, hope y'alll enjoy the extended teaser.

:pinkiehappy:

Again, next to nothin' done. Biochemistry major is just the best for not studyin'... Sarcasm :ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused:

Hey this is Xin, I'd like any constructive criticism because I wan this to be the best it can be. Also my speed is decreased significantly with producing chapters because school. I'd still like some criticism though. Alright hope anypony that reads this enjoys it.

I may add edits later but this is the chapter. Enjoy.

Ello? Any other pony out there? :applecry:

Been gone for finals prep but I got new Cover Art!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :derpytongue2: Its so good, well, I still need to study for finals so Peace and I'll be on during Winter Break to finally start updating again.

Edited what I have of chapter 4 so far so it doesn't suck. So if you've read it, reread if you can. It is MUCH better now. :pinkiehappy:

Stumbled across this just a bit ago interesting start, I'll be keeping an eye out to see where it goes, thanks for writing.

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