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Dostoron


I prefer keeping the few secrets i have.

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(2nd Person)
You are, that is really all you know. A spooky voice wants you to do bad things, claiming that it is to Keep the Balance between good and evil. You are to be unleashed on Equestria.
as what, how and why is your decision.

Idea and all due Credit goes to ChillDude78 and his Story
The Ultimate Evil this Story follows the same General Idea, of being semi interactive and Holding the same starting Point.
first fic too, let me know my mistakes,
Rating may Change later on

Chapters (41)
Comments ( 292 )

The yellow orb, the way of the Rioter.

Yellow rather revolution than war

yellow orb please, Revolution :D

TGM

Revolution.

alright, i see the votes, Rioter it is.
but i have to ask, what brought you in this direction?

i know im late to the party, but still...YELLOW FTW

also, im glad that more people are doing this:pinkiehappy: consider it faved:moustache:

3180572 I choose the Yellow Orb as well. My reason is because being the Rioter, you start as just an angry voice, a nobody in a crowd. And when your voice is heard, and others follow, you gain power. You start off with nothing, and slowly gain support and supplies. A Rebellion is harder and more difficult to maintain than a Regular Army. I guess we just like to do things the hard way. Plus, overthrowing the Princesses seems fun. :derpytongue2:

Also, if "We" are going to be from Equestria, be a Pony, can "We" be a Pegasus? I get more involved in stories when I get to be a Pegasus. :twilightsheepish:

Yellow I want to be a leader. Or as they say it a traitor

Interesting, since everyone wants yellow, I was thinking that the main character could have some sort of hood and/or mask, something to hide his face. Plus, if he has a mask then it could become a trademark of the riot, much like the Anonymous mask. If anyone has played Dishonored, Corvo's mask became a big trademark for the game which is kind of what I'm thinking of.

Well this is just my opinion, but I think it would make an interesting addition to the rioter path that we are heading onto. You don't have to use this idea but I think you should consider it.

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i really shouldn´t Spoiler, but the next set of choices is being worked on, it really all depends on you and everyone else.

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oh believe me, any ideas that may help in the future are kept considered.

Love the story so far. I have a feeling its going to get pretty hectic.

As much as I love pegasi, im going to have to go with orange: the earth pony.

And dont worry about how your english. 1: Its the internet, nobody really cares as long as its readable (which yours is). 2: The only thing your missing is capitalazation, which compared to sentence steucture is a pretty small thing.

I cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^

votes are currently pretty even... surprisingly.

okay everyone, votes are still open for 12 hours, come tomorrow i´ll take whichever has most votes and get started.

I'm going to have to go with the Pegasus. Not just because of what I said last chapter though. I really liked the Earth Pony's choice as well, but the Anger of a Prisoner who can make friends with other inmates, well right there he has a good start on a Rebellion if he an get them out. Plus, who doesn't like being Oppressed?

Have to go with the masses here: Thunderhead

I've got to go with Gene Splicer here, I love me some chaotic maddness.

I quite like the Blue, being a fan of science and unicorn magic, but I think the orange would could be more interesting especially because there are not many fan fictions in second person from a mare's perspective. Plus you state that she is an able blacksmith, there's quite a bit you could do for a blacksmith. Such is the idea of creating a mask like I had said in the previous chapter and after creating the mask she could buy a cloak to match and something to hid her cutie mark. There are many ways she could get revenge on her ex if he doesn't even recognize her.

Vote: Orange.

votes are closed, and i´m really surprised how narrow they got.
to me that´s also positive Feedback because it means i didn´t make 1 good and 2 bad choices.

winner is Thunderhead with 4 votes, i won´t Abandon the other 2, i may have an idea for those still, you´ll see.

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huh, where did that one come from? great, now it´s a draw.

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Nah its close enough. Make it thunderhead. After all, its your story.

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that Name tells me absolutely nothing, any similarities are purely coincidental.
was that an inmate from "the last fortress"?

I'm liking it so far mate. Keep it up! Besides the Capitalization errors, I don't really see anything else wrong. Can't wait for the next update!

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Cole Macgrath is the protagonist in Infamous and Infamous 2

I vote to let his colleagues handle him. Que sera sera.

let his colleagues handle him:trollestia:

I vote Colleagues as well. You can make it painful, but not a 'prison full of angry prisoners' painful. Let the bastard suffer for his actions!

i should probably mention, i Count comment votes, not the likes they get, that means 3 votes to let his Peers handle him so far.
Just in case, if you want me to Abandon the worst things, killing and the like completely let me know about that too, in that case i will switch the gore tag off

I think its fine, and that the warden should be left for the princesses to find.

I vote to make it as painful as you can make it.

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fight the power my friend, just for you i put at least a little something in the new chapter.

i vote for the mother, since it will be a good start at getting the peoples sympathy

sheesh, vote participation is less than german elections. but winner is the mother.

Option B.
Also stop putting Random capitals everywhere. It's a Little annoying. Just like This.

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the random capitals is a german Version of autocorrect, i must´ve overlooked a few.
also, could you Elaborate why?

I pick C, it would be better to get the doctor, since he will know more about his work and earning a few mad families sounds fun

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i probably didn´t make it clear but the Coldheart up there is the first mentioned Canon character, the same as Nurse Coldheart. meaning the doctor himself has indeed a much better idea what he is doing.

Option C it is then. Really wanted to go with A, but I need the good Doctor. Can I go with D? Help find the Doctor, then kick Coldheart in front of the next Train?!?!!?!

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been put into possibility in the new chapter.

Go with genes advice better to have him then her.

add

C. If you want to start a REVOLUTION, you have to show your ponies that you have a mind of a leader. You cannot just get rid a pony because the other told you so. Of course, :pinkiehappy:

I say C, if they both got the skills and you can solve the problem

You know my decision! Get rid of Coldheart!

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