• Member Since 13th Jul, 2013
  • offline last seen Sep 18th, 2016

Dream Treasure


Been watching the show since shortly before season 3 came out, loved it since.

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A party with the girls turns Apple Jack's thoughts upside down.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 9 )

the begging was cute but then it was sad! I can't wait to see what happens next.

No! This is so sad! Well I honestly like this story but it's going way to fast that's all I have to say, but it's really good.

no offence about the dislike but it has it's reasons
first of all its too rushed
second of all it's hard to understand something
but good luck :) i believe you will improve your writing skills and just because of this don't stop writing :) continue :twistnerd:

not to be rude or anything but the story seems a bit rushed but other than that good story :pinkiehappy:

no offence but whats the point of applebloom dying :applecry:

so sweeties dead now to this is so sad :fluttercry::applecry::pinkiesad2::raritycry::fluttershysad::raritydespair:

soooooooooooooooooo saaaaaaaaaaaad

so weird but funny trixie has a sister lol but gosh she is awful mean to aj and rd

i love this book so much the chapters are short but still great :ajsmug::heart::rainbowkiss:

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