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ScoobyDoom


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Flim and Flam are down on their luck after they're kicked out of yet another town for a faulty product. When this product is fixed up by a professional however, the brothers use it for revenge against one of their innocent competitors. Will their new plan help them finally get the big score? Or have they awaken an unimaginable evil?

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Comments ( 10 )

Oh, my gosh. They're awful. I officially hate them.

Edit: Just noticed this has the romance tag, too. *Shudder.*
Second edit: I actually didn't hit the downrate button. I honestly don't know what to think.

I may have to read further before I decide on an opinion about this story. You have me intrigued. :trixieshiftleft:

Don't you dare touch little Cheese, Flim and Flam. :twilightangry2:

I think someone drank a bad batch of the Miracle Tonic. :rainbowhuh:

I'm already uncertain what to think based on the description, but if you make me laugh, I might not be angry. I'm putting it into my read later pile, because sometimes I do want to ask myself "WTF did I just read?" Who knows? You might surprise me and it could be a pleasant one! I'm waiting to read it, before passing judgement, but I added it to the Flim Flam folder for you. :trollestia:


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*soothes* There's no Romance tag now. Just a Random tag. Much relief on my end for that. I'm not sure how I'd expect a romance to turn out in this situation. :ajsmug:

Although the idea of Flim and Flam wanting to steal Pinkie makes me giggle. :rainbowlaugh:

Pinkie: Hey, guys! What's going on?
Flim: We were jealous!
Flam: But now we're not.
Pinkie: You were? :rainbowhuh: Well, that's amazing! :pinkiegasp: Waaaaitaminute, what did you do? :unsuresweetie:
Flim: Hypothetically?
Flam: Theoretically?
Pinkie: No, I want to know indubitably!
Flim: Oh, well in that case, absolutely nothing.
Flam: As figuratively absolute as possible.
Pinkie: Ooookay, but I got my eye on you two! I don't like this figurative method of avoiding literalism! :ajbemused:

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You know they want her. :trollestia:

4430189 Let's give Flim and Flam to Pinkamena:pinkiecrazy:! Always wanted to try cider-flavored cupcakes!:pinkiecrazy:

4430380 What I know is that they can't have Pinkie. Not on my watch, anyway.

Now that I think of it, considering he was a colt when he left Manehattan, Cheese was still very impressionable, so that left him vulnerable to all sorts of influences. Canonically, Pinkie left a great impression on him, and as such he became the Super Duper Party Pony we know and love. The idea of someone else influencing him before he reached Ponyville opens up a world of possibilities to how he would have grown up.

Flim and Flam being an influence would certainly lead to trouble, especially with the "unimaginable evil" you mentioned in the description (I want to ask what it is, but I'll have to be patient). I'm very curious about con-pony Cheese. :trixieshiftright:

Wow, very interesting story concept. I look forward to the next update!

Okay, I'll be honest--that shift to a changeling subplot was kind of jarring. I was wondering if I was reading the same story that the first chapter was in, at least until Cheese showed up at the end. :applejackunsure: Also, each group in the class is studying the same historical figure? Hearing presentations about the same pony over and over would get kind of boring. :unsuresweetie: There are other historical figures mentioned in the show, such as those in the Hearth's Warming Play.

Last thing, Pinkie's tail twitches mean something is going to fall.

Even so, I'm still curious about how Flim and Flam changed Cheese to what's standing in the doorway, and what kinds of effects it had on some of the events of the show. :trixieshiftleft:

BUCKING FLIM AND FLAM!! WHAT THE HECK, F & F!!!!!!!:flutterrage::applejackconfused::fluttercry::fluttershbad:

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