It has been 6 years since the Humans came to Equestria.
Six long years of war between the Humans and the Equestrians. The equestrians only just making it through with their superior magic hold them off. However the Humans are back and this time with a full invasion force.
Staff Sergeant Kyle Shepard is now on mission to recon the surrounding area for the invasion force. However a drastic chain of events will open Kyle's eyes at to all wrongdoing his people have done. With that he swears to put an end to all this bloodshed, even if it costs him his life.
Cover image is courtesy of deviantart.net by user MLArtspecter original by Princrim
I hope that you aren't going to make the plot similar to Avatar, with the betrayal of his own species and the joining of the xeno species.
Oh, seems interesting. Hopefully, this won't be a rip off of Avatar. I like it already!
4645561 No no nooooooo! Definatly not! No Kyle will switch sides but also attempt to destroy the HSA by turning its own invasion forces against its fleet. Which will end up in a very big explosion to say the least. Plus note, no one certainly no one is turning into a pony. Something like that is well biologically impossible. I do see what you mean about it being similar to avatar. However there is a few differences especially the grim ending, looking at my plot notes there are a few changes I can make to avoid being a copy cat. Thank you so much for the warning before nearly crashing into a disaster. I do appreciate you're feedback. Thank you.
"I look around the grey interior of this cold ship I have called home for the last 24 months"
"It has five nuclear fission propulsion engines that can make speed of 70% of light"
So I did the math Equestria is 27,030,102,000,000,000 meters from earth assuming that you are using the speed of light in a vacuum
They move at speed of 70% of light
The fast spacecraft today moves at 44704 meters per second ( New Horizons)
So Equestria is 19,160.5 year away
4645725 I didn't even think of doing the math for that. I am actually impressed Oh and thanks for the fave!
Boo!!!! you god damn queer.
Magic isn't superior, considering that only 1/3rd of the population can use it and only top-tier unicorns can use it in combat.
Why are they even fighting?
Oh, god. Why is using the idea from Dancing With Wolves so popular?
4755752 Sorry I took this down had a bad day was a little unstable. Manned up now. Anyway I may say yes you are right. But here Magic has its advantages plus since the first crusade Equestria increased its military presence and trained ponies in defensive spells. That will be explained later. I know this story at this moment in time is confusing but persevere all will be reviled. Even with bad grammar.
As to why they are fighting I'll give you a hint... land. That will also be explained later on in the story.
Erm thank you for adding me to the group of bad writers that is well.. new but I'll take it Plus what is Dancing with Wolves?
Thanks for the input anyway mate cheers
4645725 19,160.5 years away eh..... Time to get started on that wormhole :D
There is a grammatical error in the description.
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Don't be a hater i think it's pretty good!
4924604 It's in the job description to hate Anti-Humanity things.
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True, true.
But it's only his first!