Rainbow wants to know more about Pinkie's past. So she asks Pinkie it when they go to see shooting stars.Pinkie tells her everything, from her birth to who she is today. She tells Rainbow about her non-identical twin, about who she truly is and what she lost.
But Rainbow is still confused about where Pinkie's twin is and why Pinkie never told them and in practically her.
Awwww :*)
GO FIGURE OUT WHAT COMMAS ARE!
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4437266 is that cursing
"Non-identical" twins are actually called fraternal twins, you know. Just by the way.
4532478 I know but I'm a useless speller.
4532484 I'd be quite happy to edit for you.
4532488 Hm. If you want...
4532490 Yep.
4532501 How would you edit it? I don't have others edit my work and so don't know how....
Pm me the password for the unpublished chapters and I'll read them through and find typos.
4584494 Password?
4584498 Yes, you had to enter a password for viewing the story's chapters before it was published
4584502 I left that blank..
yay i can read this story again
5344689 I don't know what happened, the chapters just went off all together..
5344943 me either but i am happy i can read this story again
5344986 Cool..
5345253 yeah
Nice.
4508266 yeah!
this is good Grammar needs a lil work and maybe there should be another chapter for when Pinkie and Surprise meet...other than that I like it
4437266 Excuse me, but nobody is perfect. I didn't notice the lack of commas until you said it. No need to be a rude person. I'm sure I can go to any of your stories and list a lot of errors,
Good Day
4437266 Oh and, go figure out what humans are, cause it looks like you have no idea what they are since you are not used to mistakes.