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Sugarcube66


Whilst 'm not as big into my little pony as when I was younger, I do wish to get back into it. And to do that, I intend to reorganize my stories slowly. Give me time.

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Rainbow wants to know more about Pinkie's past. So she asks Pinkie it when they go to see shooting stars.Pinkie tells her everything, from her birth to who she is today. She tells Rainbow about her non-identical twin, about who she truly is and what she lost.

But Rainbow is still confused about where Pinkie's twin is and why Pinkie never told them and in practically her.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 29 )

GO FIGURE OUT WHAT COMMAS ARE!
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"Non-identical" twins are actually called fraternal twins, you know. Just by the way.

4532478 I know but I'm a useless speller.

4532484 I'd be quite happy to edit for you.

4532501 How would you edit it? I don't have others edit my work and so don't know how....

Pm me the password for the unpublished chapters and I'll read them through and find typos.

4584498 Yes, you had to enter a password for viewing the story's chapters before it was published

yay i can read this story again

5344689 I don't know what happened, the chapters just went off all together..

5344943 me either but i am happy i can read this story again

this is good:heart: Grammar needs a lil work and maybe there should be another chapter for when Pinkie and Surprise meet...other than that I like it:heart:

4437266 Excuse me, but nobody is perfect. I didn't notice the lack of commas until you said it. No need to be a rude person. I'm sure I can go to any of your stories and list a lot of errors,

Good Day

4437266 Oh and, go figure out what humans are, cause it looks like you have no idea what they are since you are not used to mistakes.

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