SURPRISE!
After calming Pinkie down, Rainbow flow all the way up to cloudsdale in search of this white pegasus. She never did notice the creeping shadow behind till.
''SURPRISE!''
''AH!'' She jumped a few meters into the air then back down. She turned around and saw the pony she was looking for. She like Pinkie Pie looked happy but the happiness never reached into her purple eyes. ''Are you Surprise-amena Diane Pie?''
''How do you know my full name?''
''Er because Pinkie Pie told me'' Tears appeared in Surprise's eyes at the mention of her twin sister.
''No...No! You can't know Pink! She left all those years ago....'' Surprise landed on the sky with tears running down her beautiful angel white coat.
''I do. She moved to Ponyville and I met her after following my friend, Fluttershy to the ground. We're now best friends and she wants you, Surprise''
''But...But..Her wings..She may never have them back!''
''She trying to coop with that. She uses balloons to come to cloudsdale when I'm in my sky castle but whenever I see her, she has a faint sadness in her eyes just like you. You mess her too don't you''
''Yes I do...After she left. I ran away to cloudsdale to escape the past about my twin but...''
''You couldn't because you love Pinkie Pie''
''Yes I do love her. Where is she?''
''Come on, just follow me. She's waiting'' Surprise nodded and flow after Rainbow Dash and new tears but of happiness not sadness appeared in her eyes when she spotted her earthbound sister.
''Pinkie!!'' Pinkie looked up and gasped with tears now in her eyes when she spotted her flying sister.
''Surprise!'' The twins hugged each other with Rainbow smiling above them happy she reunited the twins. She watched as they talked about the past after their parting.
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GO FIGURE OUT WHAT COMMAS ARE!
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4437266 is that cursing
"Non-identical" twins are actually called fraternal twins, you know. Just by the way.
4532478 I know but I'm a useless speller.
4532484 I'd be quite happy to edit for you.
4532488 Hm. If you want...
4532490 Yep.
4532501 How would you edit it? I don't have others edit my work and so don't know how....
Pm me the password for the unpublished chapters and I'll read them through and find typos.
4584494 Password?
4584498 Yes, you had to enter a password for viewing the story's chapters before it was published
4584502 I left that blank..
yay i can read this story again
5344689 I don't know what happened, the chapters just went off all together..
5344943 me either but i am happy i can read this story again
5344986 Cool..
5345253 yeah
Nice.
4508266
yeah!
this is good
Grammar needs a lil work and maybe there should be another chapter for when Pinkie and Surprise meet...other than that I like it
4437266 Excuse me, but nobody is perfect. I didn't notice the lack of commas until you said it. No need to be a rude person. I'm sure I can go to any of your stories and list a lot of errors,
Good Day
4437266 Oh and, go figure out what humans are, cause it looks like you have no idea what they are since you are not used to mistakes.