Nothing much to tell. Im a german computer science student.
Tirek and his younger brother Scorpan have been terrorizing Equestria for weeks. Now, Scorpan heads north to find more power for his brother, but what he finds is more than what he had been expecting.
This was writen for the Writers Training Ground #20 from Equestria Daily.
Image from St-Pete:
http://st-pete.deviantart.com/
I would highly appreciate any criticism, but please keep it constructive.
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There are some word choices that could stand some looking at. For example was 'Curios' meant to be 'Curious', 'bowel' meant to be 'bowl', and 'waists ' meant to be 'wastes.' It is a good read, but it seems a bit clumsy, for want of a better word.
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I can't believe i missed those - _ -
thanks a million ^^
4431781 It happens, but just a thought though: read as you type. Not only does it help catch things like that, but you also "see" it play out in your head. It helps me with dialogue.