Cadance's Mining Cart Mishaps

ONE SHOT!!! Everyone loves Cadance's song This Day Aria, but it wasn't without it's fair share of problems. Especially since the mine cart scene feels like a roller coaster ride to her, too bad she can't stand roller coasters. With one mishap after another will the scene ever get finished?

Sorry folks. This was a one time deal, but if anybody else want to do a sequel to it they got my okay

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Not so New Brony

Not so New Brony #1 · May 14th, 2014 · · ·

Derpy's cameo was the one that broke the dam holding back my laughter

Razalon The Lizardman

Razalon The Lizardman #2 · May 14th, 2014 · · ·

~The lizardman would love to see more fics with this kind of premise

daniboyi

daniboyi #3 · May 14th, 2014 · 4 · ·

I began laughing when we got to Twilight's fails
Make this a whole series! It got so much potential for many more one-shots of takes that fails!

AortaHeartless

AortaHeartless #4 · May 14th, 2014 · · ·

So funny.

pendrake72

pendrake72 #5 · May 14th, 2014 · 2 · ·

@Captain-Brony...

1. I was entertained from reading this, so well done for fan-fiction writing quality there.

2. I too encourage more Fourth Wall "filming" stories like this. However, I would advise separate sequel-fictions rather than an on-going, this should help provide better storytelling clarity and stor separation per "filming scene" being told.

Captain-Brony