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Derpy's Special New Friend.

Derpy really likes going to school, she gets to make all sorts of new friends! she makes a special one too.

(This is a story written for a friend, a surprise, and it's written like a Story. they mentioned, so that's why it's written like it is. You can still feel free to dislike and lecture me about proper writing and grammar, though.)

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DragonflyDreams

DragonflyDreams #1 · May 29th, 2014 · · ·

This is really cute, I found it a bit hard to understand in parts though. Was Glowy actually a colt who wanted to dress like a filly? Or did her parents just wish they'd had a boy and didn't like her because she was a girl?

I think it's the first one, but I just think that needs to be clearer. I actually like how it's written because it sounds like it's coming from Derpy's perspective.

So yeah, overall I liked it. Really sweet