Tirek must face his crimes.
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Smaug the Golden
All is not lost; the unconquerable will, and study of revenge, immortal hate, and the courage never to submit or yield: and what else is not to be overcome?
Smaug the Golden
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Umm... so this happened.
4374044 I understand what you mean. I wrote this right off the top of my head. I don't know if I should be proud or scared.
At least it's only seven, unless long weeks are a different unit of time.
4387597 It's still the same amount of time, but Alecto makes the ticklers use roc feathers. They tickle a lot. Thus, the weeks feel longer.
Putting your punchline as the fic's description made me feel only disappointment at the end.
6045440 I wouldn't say it's a punch line. This entire thing is a spoof of court systems. It's the same way Romeo and Juliet is known as a tragedy. Them dying is something that we know is going to happen.
6045466 It's the fic's punchline even if you deny it. Sure, there's a lot happening earlier but the joke in the climax, the thing that will give a lasting impression to your readers was shown in giant neon signs even before I started reading the fanfic text itself. Boring.
Title and description are about the punishent; the fic isn't about the sentence but about the trial itself, so please put the title and description mentioning the trial instead.
(My personal expectations when I started reading the fic were some scenes with Tirek and his jailer/torturer/tickler.)
Well, this was one heck of a laugh. I could somehow see this happening. Also, poor guy, 7 weeks will not be kind to him. That's worse the prison(in some ways). Have a like and favourite
