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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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"My molars are impacted,/I'm gettin' gum disease,/I'm gonna need some fillings,/Got twelve cavities./Can you help me?/Have mercy,/Doctor please." -"Weird Al" Yankovic, 'Cavity Search'

After complaining about her sore teeth, Scootaloo goes in for a check up. But does she get more than she bargained for?

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Comments ( 19 )

Okay this needs a sequel or two. Also where was Sweetie Belle?

I haven't even read the story yet and I know it's gonna be good. Just the premise is making me smile!

4457521 Playing games with Button Mash. :rainbowwild:

4457521 Elsewhere, simple as that.

Oh man! I freeking love you Scootaloo! :heart: You're doing what I would so do XD
anyway, really great story, but you may want to go back and look over your stories, because I did notice a few spelling errors. But hey, nopony is perfect. Other than that it was a great story.

4488531 I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. I really should just take an entire day and just go over my stories with a fine tooth comb. Maybe one day soon.

4488562 Remember: slow and steady wins the race.

(what's a tooth-comb? Who are you, Dr. Polish Shine? because I would really like to know that...:pinkiegasp:

4488687 If only you understood how my mind works....and if only I did too.

I guess I meant 'fine toothed-comb'? The point is, I should review everything sooner or later.

4488741 Oh yeah, everyone's mind is different.
But you go as fast as you want to go.
(but are you Polish Shine? I really want to know...)

4488757 You mean as my OC? No. I literally made him on the fly, same with his nameless assistant. My OC is kind of a mess.

4488782 You're OC is fine. And I'm glad you're not him,.

4488798 Did you go to dA and see Day Dreamer? He's a bit of a mess xD

And if you are curious, I don't have any plans to interject my own OC in any fics.

4488861 DA is where i found the story haha.
BUt if you were him, we couldn't be friends.

4488878 Why's that?

Also, feel free to check my other stories. I got something written for everypony.

4488897 reasons. maybe I have fear. Problem?
But I will. Thank you for the invite :)

4488909 Of dentists? I understand that. In fact, writing this fic reminded me of the horrors of the dentist I had as a kid.

Of course, thanks for the read!

4488932 maybe...

Oh yah, anytime. It was worth the read

I got 4 molers removed later year around Christmas Break.

"Okay, now time for a rinse," Polish Shine said, as he lifted the mouth mirror and dental explorer out of Scootaloo's mouth and put in the water squirter in. He turned it on and water started to fill her mouth, just another form of torture to the orange pony. "Don't swallow that water, use the spit sink next to you," the doctor pointed out to the left of Scootaloo to the sink next to the tray arm.

Huh odd at my dentist they used a vacuum like probe to suck up all the spray.

Only tinr I was ever put undsr was when I had my wisdom teeth removed.

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