On a regular day, the mane 6 decide to have a sleep over.
All goes well until the next day,
Pinkie Pie won't wake up,
What is to happen to the pony of parties?
I am a purple alicorn, with magenta eyes. I live in the everfree. And my story truly is unique.
On a regular day, the mane 6 decide to have a sleep over.
All goes well until the next day,
Pinkie Pie won't wake up,
What is to happen to the pony of parties?
Several times apostrophes weren't used correctly, or they weren't used at all. Regardless of grammar, this is a nice story. I can't wait to read more!
One nitpick, Owlowiscious is a BOY, not a girl.
Sonta Dusk Fan -
I'll try to work on that. Heh.. Not easy to type when you use an iPhone, the things are not exactly smart when it comes to grammar.
SuperPinkBrony12
Well then... I did not know this, I always thought Owlicious was a girl. Woops.
~Flow
Didn't they try to wake Pinkie up first?
this is awsome! needs to continue
Sonta Dusk Fan -
Um... I think so. Let's just say they were freaking out too much to do so. It was midnight when I typed this... Heh.
alexiszocco -
Thankyou. So very much. Haha. It will continue.
~Flow
Just a tip, you see that ">>" in the upper righthoof corner? Click that,and you can respond to ponies, Miss Flow
Also, I seemed to have found another book of yours, it was in the Ponyville Library, in the back of a bookshelf. Here ya are.
~Lucky
Really good story.Can't wait for more.
4759653
Yeah I figured the little arrows were in the top rightpaw corner a while ago. (Why do I say paw? Original persona is a wolf.) *nervously laughs* Did I say paw? I meant hoof..
And thank you. I guess I should probably work on the story. Hehe. I like how it ends.
*grins* You'll see~
~Flow
4759736 yes ma'am.