Author's note to viewer: I am not a good writer, so please show and tell me errors in my grammar, punctuation, spelling, and anything in the story that is incorrect. Thank you.
After defeating the Brethern Moon above Tau Volantis, our hero, Isaac Clarke, lets go of all his burdens, prepares himself for death, his true death, but something rather strange, very strange happens and Isaac crashes onto a planet with..... multi-colored horses, will this man's shattered mind cope with this world, or will Isaac's bad luck follow him to this world, only time will tell.
Chapters (3)
So far it is pretty good. I did enjoy it.
ohmygodohmygodohmygod hahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahah
almost forgot, If I manage myself to stay on track since I have a tendency to get off track, Red heart will be helping in away which I do not want to expose, plus I haven't made it that far yet
I like it so far.
6092821 thank you
It's Brother Moon.
6161847 Sorry to burst the bubble, but ive got to spelling the name its easy to spell, I watched the in-game subtitles, payyed very close attention. look at the wiki
6162223 I'm just saying man, last I checked anywhere the round parasites were called Brother Moon's, I don't know I guess it got changed or the person who placed it on the Wiki got it wrong.
6165185 hmm, seems legit
6165683 Indeed.
Other than a couple of grammar errors, this is shaping up to be a very interesting story!
It shows.... promise and lots of potential, the dark brotherhood and I will be watching. knowledge is power guard it well. Melts into the shadows