For some odd reason I can't seem to recognize in my mind that this Scootaloo is Asexual, and I'm thinking of her as Demisexual... I think it's because of the video call?
I didn't think you'd write Scootaloo to be so... chillax? She's as calm about situations like that as. Well, I wholly approve of this awesome asexual Scootaloo! (though don't most asexuals just get weirded out and generally hate sex? I've yet to meet such a rational asexual, but I'll assume they exist. This Scootaloo acts more like me than what some of my more sensitive buddies tend to act like. I'd like to meet an asexual who was as chill as Scoots! Normally I only see bi or pans act that way.)
Far as consistency goes, this chapter was really weird. Why would Diamond Tiara genuinely believe she did nothing wrong when she's feared of being caught and expelled for what she and Silver and Dee have been doing, and wouldn't that eventually expose Sweetie Belle if Di got found out for the porn?
Silver Spoon really spazzed out, but no doubt she's just really upset about having to leave the university as much as Di. I'd imagine she'd at least be crying over being descriminated against for being lesbians, especially given Dee got a pass on the whole exploring his sexuality to which they KNEW he was doing pornos.
Dee says the 'others' abandoned him once he reconnected with Sweetie Belle, yet it was Sweetie Belle who barred Diamond and Silver from ever coming near him again in her emotional outrage despite Di and Silvy actually caring about him by that point. I mean, I get that what they did to teach a 'perv' a lesson in the stalls for pretending to be a girl and not seeing Silvy's panties, but to be fair they only escalated after they witnessed how eager he was getting for Silver to mount him. Not to mention I'd assume it's been over a year with Di and Sil taking those hormone pills.
I don't know, would have been nice to have had a discrimination subplot where Snips and Snails try to usurp power or get back at Di and Sil for protecting Dee from them all that time. And Di&Sil got his bag back after Sweetie told them to fuck off essentially, with the pills in bag as a good bye thing along with the letter? I can't recall if the bag had the pills, my bad.
This chapter just feels like it's sweeping them under the rug. I get it's supposed to be all about Button, it's just... Apple Bloom is super pretigious alcchemist or something under some big name facility and whatever, BABS SEED winning some anti-bullying scholarship? (only in Equestria, U.S. practically rewards bullism... geez.) The only one who didn't feel overly glorified was Scootaloo.
Hard to believe Sweetie Belle and Dee doesn't care about Di and Sil being kicked out. Well, it was almost implied Dee did care if he got Di and Sil kicked, I'd like to believe he still cares for them even if Sweetie thinks they're just bad for him and doesn't let him talk to them.
I have no real opinion on Apple Bloom yet, she's fine for what's been shown. Tentacle plants. Heh. So hope she adds something nice to the story. I was wondering if Twist would ever show up again. God she's scary. Poor dee. xD
Well, that's about it. Mostly just feels like it's ignoring past chapter events that really made these characters feel more well-rounded. Likable. Right now it feels like you're being yelled at by someone to get rid of those two, Di & Silvy. Altering Dee's memory, granted he was knocked out when Sweetie blew her shit, she still told him about them and forbade their friendships.
I look forward to the blog post. I started reading this before its prequel, but taking everything in as a whole, I think you shouldn't have to feel you should hold back with anything. You made this M rated yet everything so far it just feels like it's not living up to its potential. Things just didn't fit well in this chapter.
Too long? Sorry, still waking up. Though I should get some more rest. Aside from the parts that didn't mesh with established canon in this universe, the stuff with Scootaloo and being an amputee and having a potential trauma and other stuff she could be dealing with, I really liked the chapter.
5426214 As far as Dee feeling abandoned, you have to remember that she most likely isn't as aware that Sweetie forbade interaction as she could be. Don't forget that as far as she was aware, she got a note that amounted to "We've done you more harm than good; please find somebody else," and that was it.
As far as discrimination goes, there's certainly enough opportunity for that. After all, not everybody is accepting.
So far as I am aware [at least, so far as my research has led me to believe, it's not that sex weirds them out; they just don't have the same interest in it.
I think I've said it before but I'll say it again. I came here for the clop, stayed for the plot. Both kinds of plot. While I don't mean to seem presumptuous [more hopeful really] as it's probably just a co-inky-dink but any chance you got the asexual Scootaloo idea from my story?
5495634 As far as Scootaloo's masturbation is concerned, I approached the situation with the idea in mind that she sees it as simply an option to blow off steam and unwind. That it feels good is just a bonus. I think in the Author's Notes, I mentioned actually looking into it while this chapter was being written, but basically I looked into whether or not asexual individuals masturbated at all, and while it varied on an individual basis, what I expressed here was not far off from what one woman stated.
Why might Diamond have dropped the stuff with Dee, yet see herself as having done no wrong as far as their little amateur porno empire? I'd like to imagine that Silver Spoon explained to her that while their extracurricular activities might only have violated school policy, but what initially had happened with Dee amounted to blackmail and rape, both very real crimes, Diamond would have been angry about it, but of course she didn't want to risk angering Sweetie Belle, who might push Dee to report what they'd done. Heck, she might have even been why Snips and Snails found out so quickly that 'Button' was no longer 'their toy'.
Your comment about Diamond Tiara's behaviour makes sense, thanks. Though it paints her like an utterly callous narcissist. If Silver Spoon genuinely _does_ feel remorse then that's quite a story itself, how she's stayed with Diamond Tiara anyway. Engaging sex is a motivation to put up with a lot. But getting intimate with someone whom circumstances show is _that_ unconcerned with others...it should disquiet any normal person into wondering "...am I an exception, or am I just more _useful_ than the others to her?"
Perhaps she genuinely does love Diamond and plays the moral counterbalance out of love when they aren't caught up in the heat of a moment?
5721114 The issue isn't exactly as you imagine it, but you're not too far from the mark. In her past experiences and sessions with Diamond and Silver, Dee—still Button at that point—had been somewhat conditioned to prioritize her partners pleasure. From there, she'd begun associating doing a good job making her partner feel good with feeling/being sexy—a twisted form of self-validation, if you would. It's evident enough during the sex scene in the second chapter when she sinks into her 'usual' submissive role. Because of the way that she got off on anal—prostate orgasms and all that—she'd come to associate the anal that followed with rewarded for doing a good job.
She did not so much as 'fail at being Dee' as she had assumed Sweetie Belle's refusal to be a failure to make her feel good. As much as she was a willing participant with Diamond and Silver after the events of the 'Buttonette, Button Mash', there was still the lingering fact that her first time was coerced. She still bore the scars of that encounter, the fear of some sort of reprisal. Coupled with her addiction to feeling sexy and receiving anal, it's little wonder she freaked out. Partner didn't feel good = No reward = No new material for Diamond/Silver = DT/SS angry = No longer useful = Abandonment. It doesn't matter if it actually would have happened that way, so much as that's how in that moment, she thought it would happen. After all, it was a codependent relationship born in part from a traumatic event.
Dee did not hate being Button per se, but she recognized that the person DT/SS had shaped her into had provided her a window into a more social life that Button never really had. In addition to self validation and social interaction, they instilled self-confidence—however shaky it might have been—and showed her that she could be something more than 'that guy who only plays video games'. Unfortunately, much of this, too, was dependent on having the support of others, or at least their presence. At that panicked moment in time, she feared the possibility of Diamond and Silver cutting her off... that without those two 'training' and motivating her, she'd sink back into her old reclusive ways. At least subconsciously, she knew she probably couldn't continue to be Dee without the support of others.
5497174 I could honestly see Scoots in a perfectly happy friendship with a male roomy. One who also had a high libido who just does it to relieve stress and anxiety, as masturbation does for both sexes, and the two (much like in this one Christmas movie with five different sets of friends from different walks of life had*) would just be masturbating while having casual talk about how uptight some people are, you know if this was a mixed dorm that allowed male and female to be roommates anyways. lol
All the while Scoots might end up picking up a phone call from Apple Bloom or Sweetie Belle comes over (who just gets grossed out around dudes, especially those masturbating in front of her no less!) catching site of Scoots masturbating only to catch sight of some dude in her room dropping his shorts and starting to rub one off as he passed Scoots an energy drink while he turns on the TV to watch the local news.
These two just acting like Sweetie's the odd one out acting like she's never rubbed one off of something. Sweetie calls him a freak or getsupset at him only for the dude to remark how much of a sexist she is or a prude by making a comment about how she acts like she never seen a penis before, or rubbed one off for that matter. That last comment making Sweetie Belle turn to glare at Scoots who merely shrugs before her roommate replies how all his friends talk about Sweetie Belle's massive third leg and how her 'secret' is anything BUT a secret.
So, completely ignoring Sweetie Belle, he goes back to his rythm and Scoots just the whole while hasn't stopped trying to climax to relieve some of that ache. After all, climaxes do release an endorphene that helps relieve headaches and helps you stay healthy, Scoots is all about staying healthy.
Sweetie's flustered expression would be priceless. A dude who finally found a roommate who he doesn't have to hide his need to masterbate and Scoots who found a dude who isn't actually interested in trying to seduce her, and doesn't get all too upset since he doesn't leave a mess around the house. The perfect friendship!
Sweetie, though, as if Scoots wasn't enough. At least Scoots she could handle, Scoots has a vagina, but saying something offensive like 'but a guy masturbating? What the HELL Scoots?!' could spark a very interesting convo between the dude and Sweetie about how much of a fascist she is and how much of a hypocrite she is. Not like he's forcing himself on Scoots, and Scoots has been doing it in front of him since day one and though Scoots was a bit weary, Scoots totally figured it was only fair as long as she didn't end up coming in contact with his gunk. Thus making and putting Sweetie Belle in the awkward position of just being unreasonable, that last part coming from Scoots who tries to ease the tension in the room, no pun in intended. lol
*In this Christmas movie (and no it's not a porno, it's one of those multi-pov movies where eventually all storylines intersect near the end to reveal a bigger picture), there is this one dude who does pornos for a living. He ends up meeting a woman whose now his partner for this new porn they are filming, so he and his peer begin to talk, as is the norm for these people I imagine (lol), the two talk about how hard it is to find a relationship that's not just all about sex, all the while these two are doing crazy positions and being filmed, spoilers: eventually they start dating after they realize they have so much in common including what favorite drinks they have!)
P.S. Lol I think this could end up being a somewhat interesting convo between Dee and Scoots someday. Dee could whack it all he wants as long as she's tidy about it. Not that the even shrinking penis will be usable for much longer, but Dee still is only pony after all and smells and sounds along with visuals can cause unwanted increase in the 'oh shit I have to get off some how' department for anyone. I wonder if Dee ends up ever getting tempted to use that nub on his penis? Wonder how Scoots would react if she caught her playing with her relaxer.
P.P.S. Oh and far as that DT thing goes, yeah, story felt like it's just been trying to distance itself from negativity for awhile. I doubt Diamond Tiara is uncaring towards Silver or Dee, at one point the fic shows what looks like genuine concern for Dee and her want to at least give him stuff to continue his medications. But short of a rewrite of some scenes, and putting more of what people want us to see into the story instead of a sex crazed Sweetie Belle who took advantage of her own friend KNOWING there were red flags all over the place, doesn't help matters when she goes all White Knight last minute.
It's not perfect, but it's still nice to see that whatever happens, Di and Silvy at least protected him from the ones who put Button into a situation that made him look like a depraved pervert out to steal used panties and get a jump on girls who came into the bathroom. Pretty sure with two against one, Button wouldn't even be in school anymore if they had snitched about how he was huddled up in the girls bathroom holding clutching onto Silver's panties. Course, that would have brought up interesting questions, but with how common it is to remove undergarments when going to the toilet, it could be easily waved off.
Button is quite the tragic character. But one character whom I've been wanting to see a reaction from hasn't surfaced yet. Button's Mom. At least, I don't recall any mentions of her.
Well, I guess that's enough. Gotta go for now. And yeah, totally agree with you on Scoots. Kinda hard to really take in what is allowed and frowned upon in this Equestria. Maybe since it's a matriarchy mares just get exemptions while the colts and stallions get castrated for public indecency? :p
5721397 Thank you for attempting to clear this up for me.
Button at that point—had been somewhat conditioned to prioritize her partners pleasure.
This is what I do not understand. Based on this, his train of thought should be "Sweetie does not derive pleasure from anal. Priority. Adjust parameters. I would not be a good boy/girl if I forced her." Perhaps he could even have asked her to administer a dildo. I just did not think that his apparent new-found confidence matched his breakdown, as he seemed so confident before when seducing Sweetie or dressing up and then negotiating with his 'tormentors', unless that had been feigned or he is of split mind.
However, I also recognize that you made it clear that we should not try to rationalize what goes on in his head.
*Edit* Rereads your comment. Wait, he fears that they are going to abandon him? After all their investment? And he couldn't even understand it when they themselves wrote the letter.
Wait.. is there a connection story or something that goes into more detail behind Sweetie's futa penis? I f I missed a link, I apologize for what should have been obvious in that regard.
5927599 I remember that she says that it was from a potion experiment by Applebloom that turned her into a guy for a week, but I was wondering if that's a story in and of itself. If not, oh well; if so, I'd love to read it
I can't wait to see the next chapter, and hope that you're doing well with life and whatnot! Have a good one and thanks for taking the time to respond to me!
Good job, you have compiled a list of things I like into one story. I am now stuck with a desire to read more.
An asexual, a hermaphrodite, and a transmare all walk into a bar. . . . . . The bartender immediately starts laughing, the three question him and he replied "Feminist," he points to the transmare, "F***," pointing at the hermaphrodite, "no one!" He says finally point to the asexual. . . . The bartender gives them each a drink, The transmare sips her appletini, the hermaphrodite says "f*** it!" And chugs her beer, the asexual, having heard the hermaphrodite's comment, pushes her drink back and says "I'd rather not." . . . The bartender stops and asks "what is this, some kind of joke? " . . . You would think one of them would have saw it. . . . The bartender, unaware of the punchline, serves them each a drink and nothing funny happens.
I am speechless, after reading the first book, I thought this was only going to fall to a clop fic. But no, it didn't, this story highlights the suffering of transgender people in our own society. I love books, paper, games, etc. that make such a comment on our society. I really don't know what to say, expect Wow, bravo. I cannot wait to see how this story ends.
5720145 Going off the assumption that this world is like the EQG world, yes women be the traditional leaders due to a population difference and different cultural development.
“It just means that I’m not sexually attracted to stallions and mares,” she replied simply. “I’m not going to say no to a stress reliever that feels good just because it doesn’t match up with the perceptions of others. A girl has needs either way.”
This is why I love fan fictions, this kind of philosophy. I'm asexual but stress relief is something that is fine for people or what have you So I salute you
6504242 People oft look at things pertaining to sexuality in terms of black and white... Absolutes. A person sexually attracted to men cannot fall in love with a woman. A person who is sexually aroused by My Little Pony is definitely going to go out and bugger a horse. All asexual folk are prudes and are grossed out by all things sex.
People prefer predictability, and the human mind is anything but. Absolutes are rarely ever true, because no two people are the same. I tried to avoid falling into preconceptions when I first drafted the asexual Scootaloo, and instead did some research. Lo and behold, there were asexual folk of that opinion.
6505038 I know, but some more absolute-minded people I've met are not so prone to research. I mean, I enjoy a good hentai or clop-fic every so often, does that mean I'm a liar? No, I enjoy depictions and fantasies, but not the actual action or even videos. But it reinforces my hope in humanity, even if you may be an isolated example.
But hey, what do I know? I'm told by those same people to not make sexual jokes, references, or the like because I haven't experienced it. What a dumb reason.
Oh look another Christmas Present. Cheers
For some odd reason I can't seem to recognize in my mind that this Scootaloo is Asexual, and I'm thinking of her as Demisexual... I think it's because of the video call?
Thus end's Dee's First Day as Dee. Next up is the 37.media.tumblr.com/f8bf1d78fecc93811fd5d168a75260cf/tumblr_mfa4eiqYxe1qj1kboo1_500.jpg
Silver Script, eh? SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION HO!
Merry Christmas to you too Seven! And thanks for this 'gift' of a story update!
This hit a little bit too close to home. I know how Dee feels, having a penis sucks
Great Chapter Seven!
I didn't think you'd write Scootaloo to be so... chillax? She's as calm about situations like that as. Well, I wholly approve of this awesome asexual Scootaloo! (though don't most asexuals just get weirded out and generally hate sex? I've yet to meet such a rational asexual, but I'll assume they exist. This Scootaloo acts more like me than what some of my more sensitive buddies tend to act like. I'd like to meet an asexual who was as chill as Scoots! Normally I only see bi or pans act that way.)
Far as consistency goes, this chapter was really weird. Why would Diamond Tiara genuinely believe she did nothing wrong when she's feared of being caught and expelled for what she and Silver and Dee have been doing, and wouldn't that eventually expose Sweetie Belle if Di got found out for the porn?
Silver Spoon really spazzed out, but no doubt she's just really upset about having to leave the university as much as Di. I'd imagine she'd at least be crying over being descriminated against for being lesbians, especially given Dee got a pass on the whole exploring his sexuality to which they KNEW he was doing pornos.
Dee says the 'others' abandoned him once he reconnected with Sweetie Belle, yet it was Sweetie Belle who barred Diamond and Silver from ever coming near him again in her emotional outrage despite Di and Silvy actually caring about him by that point. I mean, I get that what they did to teach a 'perv' a lesson in the stalls for pretending to be a girl and not seeing Silvy's panties, but to be fair they only escalated after they witnessed how eager he was getting for Silver to mount him. Not to mention I'd assume it's been over a year with Di and Sil taking those hormone pills.
I don't know, would have been nice to have had a discrimination subplot where Snips and Snails try to usurp power or get back at Di and Sil for protecting Dee from them all that time. And Di&Sil got his bag back after Sweetie told them to fuck off essentially, with the pills in bag as a good bye thing along with the letter? I can't recall if the bag had the pills, my bad.
This chapter just feels like it's sweeping them under the rug. I get it's supposed to be all about Button, it's just... Apple Bloom is super pretigious alcchemist or something under some big name facility and whatever, BABS SEED winning some anti-bullying scholarship? (only in Equestria, U.S. practically rewards bullism... geez.) The only one who didn't feel overly glorified was Scootaloo.
Hard to believe Sweetie Belle and Dee doesn't care about Di and Sil being kicked out. Well, it was almost implied Dee did care if he got Di and Sil kicked, I'd like to believe he still cares for them even if Sweetie thinks they're just bad for him and doesn't let him talk to them.
I have no real opinion on Apple Bloom yet, she's fine for what's been shown. Tentacle plants. Heh. So hope she adds something nice to the story. I was wondering if Twist would ever show up again. God she's scary. Poor dee. xD
Well, that's about it. Mostly just feels like it's ignoring past chapter events that really made these characters feel more well-rounded. Likable. Right now it feels like you're being yelled at by someone to get rid of those two, Di & Silvy. Altering Dee's memory, granted he was knocked out when Sweetie blew her shit, she still told him about them and forbade their friendships.
I look forward to the blog post. I started reading this before its prequel, but taking everything in as a whole, I think you shouldn't have to feel you should hold back with anything. You made this M rated yet everything so far it just feels like it's not living up to its potential. Things just didn't fit well in this chapter.
Too long? Sorry, still waking up. Though I should get some more rest. Aside from the parts that didn't mesh with established canon in this universe, the stuff with Scootaloo and being an amputee and having a potential trauma and other stuff she could be dealing with, I really liked the chapter.
5426214 As far as Dee feeling abandoned, you have to remember that she most likely isn't as aware that Sweetie forbade interaction as she could be. Don't forget that as far as she was aware, she got a note that amounted to "We've done you more harm than good; please find somebody else," and that was it.
As far as discrimination goes, there's certainly enough opportunity for that. After all, not everybody is accepting.
So far as I am aware [at least, so far as my research has led me to believe, it's not that sex weirds them out; they just don't have the same interest in it.
I think I've said it before but I'll say it again. I came here for the clop, stayed for the plot. Both kinds of plot.
While I don't mean to seem presumptuous [more hopeful really] as it's probably just a co-inky-dink but any chance you got the asexual Scootaloo idea from my story?
5457270 Nope. Purely coincidental.
I read that in FIlthy Frank's voice.
5495634 As far as Scootaloo's masturbation is concerned, I approached the situation with the idea in mind that she sees it as simply an option to blow off steam and unwind. That it feels good is just a bonus. I think in the Author's Notes, I mentioned actually looking into it while this chapter was being written, but basically I looked into whether or not asexual individuals masturbated at all, and while it varied on an individual basis, what I expressed here was not far off from what one woman stated.
Why might Diamond have dropped the stuff with Dee, yet see herself as having done no wrong as far as their little amateur porno empire? I'd like to imagine that Silver Spoon explained to her that while their extracurricular activities might only have violated school policy, but what initially had happened with Dee amounted to blackmail and rape, both very real crimes, Diamond would have been angry about it, but of course she didn't want to risk angering Sweetie Belle, who might push Dee to report what they'd done. Heck, she might have even been why Snips and Snails found out so quickly that 'Button' was no longer 'their toy'.
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Perhaps she genuinely does love Diamond and plays the moral counterbalance out of love when they aren't caught up in the heat of a moment?
5721114 The issue isn't exactly as you imagine it, but you're not too far from the mark. In her past experiences and sessions with Diamond and Silver, Dee—still Button at that point—had been somewhat conditioned to prioritize her partners pleasure. From there, she'd begun associating doing a good job making her partner feel good with feeling/being sexy—a twisted form of self-validation, if you would. It's evident enough during the sex scene in the second chapter when she sinks into her 'usual' submissive role. Because of the way that she got off on anal—prostate orgasms and all that—she'd come to associate the anal that followed with rewarded for doing a good job.
She did not so much as 'fail at being Dee' as she had assumed Sweetie Belle's refusal to be a failure to make her feel good. As much as she was a willing participant with Diamond and Silver after the events of the 'Buttonette, Button Mash', there was still the lingering fact that her first time was coerced. She still bore the scars of that encounter, the fear of some sort of reprisal. Coupled with her addiction to feeling sexy and receiving anal, it's little wonder she freaked out. Partner didn't feel good = No reward = No new material for Diamond/Silver = DT/SS angry = No longer useful = Abandonment. It doesn't matter if it actually would have happened that way, so much as that's how in that moment, she thought it would happen. After all, it was a codependent relationship born in part from a traumatic event.
Dee did not hate being Button per se, but she recognized that the person DT/SS had shaped her into had provided her a window into a more social life that Button never really had. In addition to self validation and social interaction, they instilled self-confidence—however shaky it might have been—and showed her that she could be something more than 'that guy who only plays video games'. Unfortunately, much of this, too, was dependent on having the support of others, or at least their presence. At that panicked moment in time, she feared the possibility of Diamond and Silver cutting her off... that without those two 'training' and motivating her, she'd sink back into her old reclusive ways. At least subconsciously, she knew she probably couldn't continue to be Dee without the support of others.
Does that clear it up any?
5497174 I could honestly see Scoots in a perfectly happy friendship with a male roomy. One who also had a high libido who just does it to relieve stress and anxiety, as masturbation does for both sexes, and the two (much like in this one Christmas movie with five different sets of friends from different walks of life had*) would just be masturbating while having casual talk about how uptight some people are, you know if this was a mixed dorm that allowed male and female to be roommates anyways. lol
All the while Scoots might end up picking up a phone call from Apple Bloom or Sweetie Belle comes over (who just gets grossed out around dudes, especially those masturbating in front of her no less!) catching site of Scoots masturbating only to catch sight of some dude in her room dropping his shorts and starting to rub one off as he passed Scoots an energy drink while he turns on the TV to watch the local news.
These two just acting like Sweetie's the odd one out acting like she's never rubbed one off of something. Sweetie calls him a freak or getsupset at him only for the dude to remark how much of a sexist she is or a prude by making a comment about how she acts like she never seen a penis before, or rubbed one off for that matter. That last comment making Sweetie Belle turn to glare at Scoots who merely shrugs before her roommate replies how all his friends talk about Sweetie Belle's massive third leg and how her 'secret' is anything BUT a secret.
So, completely ignoring Sweetie Belle, he goes back to his rythm and Scoots just the whole while hasn't stopped trying to climax to relieve some of that ache. After all, climaxes do release an endorphene that helps relieve headaches and helps you stay healthy, Scoots is all about staying healthy.
Sweetie's flustered expression would be priceless. A dude who finally found a roommate who he doesn't have to hide his need to masterbate and Scoots who found a dude who isn't actually interested in trying to seduce her, and doesn't get all too upset since he doesn't leave a mess around the house. The perfect friendship!
Sweetie, though, as if Scoots wasn't enough. At least Scoots she could handle, Scoots has a vagina, but saying something offensive like 'but a guy masturbating? What the HELL Scoots?!' could spark a very interesting convo between the dude and Sweetie about how much of a fascist she is and how much of a hypocrite she is. Not like he's forcing himself on Scoots, and Scoots has been doing it in front of him since day one and though Scoots was a bit weary, Scoots totally figured it was only fair as long as she didn't end up coming in contact with his gunk. Thus making and putting Sweetie Belle in the awkward position of just being unreasonable, that last part coming from Scoots who tries to ease the tension in the room, no pun in intended. lol
*In this Christmas movie (and no it's not a porno, it's one of those multi-pov movies where eventually all storylines intersect near the end to reveal a bigger picture), there is this one dude who does pornos for a living. He ends up meeting a woman whose now his partner for this new porn they are filming, so he and his peer begin to talk, as is the norm for these people I imagine (lol), the two talk about how hard it is to find a relationship that's not just all about sex, all the while these two are doing crazy positions and being filmed, spoilers: eventually they start dating after they realize they have so much in common including what favorite drinks they have!)
P.S. Lol I think this could end up being a somewhat interesting convo between Dee and Scoots someday. Dee could whack it all he wants as long as she's tidy about it. Not that the even shrinking penis will be usable for much longer, but Dee still is only pony after all and smells and sounds along with visuals can cause unwanted increase in the 'oh shit I have to get off some how' department for anyone. I wonder if Dee ends up ever getting tempted to use that nub on his penis? Wonder how Scoots would react if she caught her playing with her relaxer.
P.P.S. Oh and far as that DT thing goes, yeah, story felt like it's just been trying to distance itself from negativity for awhile. I doubt Diamond Tiara is uncaring towards Silver or Dee, at one point the fic shows what looks like genuine concern for Dee and her want to at least give him stuff to continue his medications. But short of a rewrite of some scenes, and putting more of what people want us to see into the story instead of a sex crazed Sweetie Belle who took advantage of her own friend KNOWING there were red flags all over the place, doesn't help matters when she goes all White Knight last minute.
It's not perfect, but it's still nice to see that whatever happens, Di and Silvy at least protected him from the ones who put Button into a situation that made him look like a depraved pervert out to steal used panties and get a jump on girls who came into the bathroom. Pretty sure with two against one, Button wouldn't even be in school anymore if they had snitched about how he was huddled up in the girls bathroom holding clutching onto Silver's panties. Course, that would have brought up interesting questions, but with how common it is to remove undergarments when going to the toilet, it could be easily waved off.
Button is quite the tragic character. But one character whom I've been wanting to see a reaction from hasn't surfaced yet. Button's Mom. At least, I don't recall any mentions of her.
Well, I guess that's enough. Gotta go for now. And yeah, totally agree with you on Scoots. Kinda hard to really take in what is allowed and frowned upon in this Equestria. Maybe since it's a matriarchy mares just get exemptions while the colts and stallions get castrated for public indecency? :p
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Thank you for attempting to clear this up for me.
This is what I do not understand. Based on this, his train of thought should be "Sweetie does not derive pleasure from anal. Priority. Adjust parameters. I would not be a good boy/girl if I forced her." Perhaps he could even have asked her to administer a dildo. I just did not think that his apparent new-found confidence matched his breakdown, as he seemed so confident before when seducing Sweetie or dressing up and then negotiating with his 'tormentors', unless that had been feigned or he is of split mind.
However, I also recognize that you made it clear that we should not try to rationalize what goes on in his head.
*Edit* Rereads your comment.
Wait, he fears that they are going to abandon him? After all their investment? And he couldn't even understand it when they themselves wrote the letter.
That was fucking glorious XD
And also, as someone currently going through all the joys of gender reassignment...
This is extremely accurate to the drastic changes in relationships. High hopes for Dee's talk with her mum
Wait.. is there a connection story or something that goes into more detail behind Sweetie's futa penis? I f I missed a link, I apologize for what should have been obvious in that regard.
5927377 There had been some exposition on it, though presently the when/where of the chapter escapes me.
5927599 I remember that she says that it was from a potion experiment by Applebloom that turned her into a guy for a week, but I was wondering if that's a story in and of itself. If not, oh well; if so, I'd love to read it
I can't wait to see the next chapter, and hope that you're doing well with life and whatnot! Have a good one and thanks for taking the time to respond to me!
Good job, you have compiled a list of things I like into one story. I am now stuck with a desire to read more.
An asexual, a hermaphrodite, and a transmare all walk into a bar. . .
. . . The bartender immediately starts laughing, the three question him and he replied "Feminist," he points to the transmare, "F***," pointing at the hermaphrodite, "no one!" He says finally point to the asexual.
. . . The bartender gives them each a drink, The transmare sips her appletini, the hermaphrodite says "f*** it!" And chugs her beer, the asexual, having heard the hermaphrodite's comment, pushes her drink back and says "I'd rather not."
. . . The bartender stops and asks "what is this, some kind of joke? "
. . . You would think one of them would have saw it.
. . . The bartender, unaware of the punchline, serves them each a drink and nothing funny happens.
6015706 nice. love the jokes.
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Thanks I thought they were sub par.
6036289 as a guy who loves bad jokes, those were amazing. really love the last one.
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You just might be my new favorite.
6044135 eeeeeee!!!
I am speechless, after reading the first book, I thought this was only going to fall to a clop fic. But no, it didn't, this story highlights the suffering of transgender people in our own society. I love books, paper, games, etc. that make such a comment on our society. I really don't know what to say, expect Wow, bravo. I cannot wait to see how this story ends.
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Going off the assumption that this world is like the EQG world, yes women be the traditional leaders due to a population difference and different cultural development.
Came for the pegging, stayed for the possibility of future pegging, then just sort of stayed.
Could we get more of this? This is one of my favorite stories I've stumbled across in a long while...
“It just means that I’m not sexually attracted to stallions and mares,” she replied simply. “I’m not going to say no to a stress reliever that feels good just because it doesn’t match up with the perceptions of others. A girl has needs either way.”
This is why I love fan fictions, this kind of philosophy. I'm asexual but stress relief is something that is fine for people or what have you
So I salute you
6504242 People oft look at things pertaining to sexuality in terms of black and white... Absolutes.
A person sexually attracted to men cannot fall in love with a woman.
A person who is sexually aroused by My Little Pony is definitely going to go out and bugger a horse.
All asexual folk are prudes and are grossed out by all things sex.
People prefer predictability, and the human mind is anything but. Absolutes are rarely ever true, because no two people are the same. I tried to avoid falling into preconceptions when I first drafted the asexual Scootaloo, and instead did some research. Lo and behold, there were asexual folk of that opinion.
6505038 I know, but some more absolute-minded people I've met are not so prone to research. I mean, I enjoy a good hentai or clop-fic every so often, does that mean I'm a liar? No, I enjoy depictions and fantasies, but not the actual action or even videos. But it reinforces my hope in humanity, even if you may be an isolated example.
But hey, what do I know? I'm told by those same people to not make sexual jokes, references, or the like because I haven't experienced it. What a dumb reason.
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the World is not Black & White, but shades of Gray.
Giggity.
As a southerner, I would just like to point out that y'all is only used in plural. It's a contraction of you all, i.e. plural.