5303885 Actually, one of the other CMCs is present. Scootaloo was actually mentioned in a Sweetie Belle centric section a few chapters back. She just didn't register in Dee's mind for some reason.
5303923 Even if he was asexual, he probably would not be in the women's dorm.
5303991 I believe there is a moviie, cannot remember what it is called, but it was a little girl who made herself look like a guy because she was uncomfortable with herself. It wasn't until mid-teens that she finally came out and went back to being tomboy
5304001 Whenever I've pictured characters while writing, they've had a thick enough coat that it determined their color,, but thin enough in sensitive areas, like fingertips, areola and nipple, or pubic areas to not be a nuisance, and also not make shaving pubic areas too bizarre.
really glad to see this fic update. i was getting worried.
Pausing to look over her shoulder, she caught Sweetie’s smirk. “You’re not going to tell me who she is, are you?” she asked, continuing her way down the hall. Dee’s query was met only with giggles.
I love this story Seven Fates! I am a transgender girl who started transitioning in the summer, I think this story was one of the things that finally pushed me over to come out. I am so glad that you are attempting to tell this story as tastefully as you can. I also like the erotic scenes though, super hot! If you ever need any first hand experiences I will be glad to share :)
5305248 If my story has encouraged you to come out and begin transition, it pleases me to hear my work has helped push someone in the direction of happiness, regardless of whatever hardships they face. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story thus far, and I wish you the best in your endeavors.
Ah yes, an update to my favorite story. And a good update too! (albeit a bit short) But hey! Good to see you are alive and well!
I do believe we have met this character before. I'm not sure where, but I'm probably gonna give myself a good hard kick in the flank if i don't remember.
Gotta say, I was never a fan of slice of life stories, but this really keeps my attention. To my knowledge, transitioning is something that plays havoc on the mind, particularly when you don't use a doctor who will give you prescriptions so your brain chemistry doesn't become unbalanced due to the hormones. It is almost to the point that your perspectives and even a bit of your personality is shifting even as you are processing everything else you normally do. Add in Snips and Snails along with the douche at the arcade, you get a hell of a traumatic experience. At first I thought Dee would move in with Sweetie, but now I'm interested in who this asexual character is.
Lovely chapter. I am glad I stayed up so late to read it. I actually stumbled across the chapter on accident the first time and it didn't say there was that many new chapters but lo and behold it was under the new ones. I'm not sure why really but my account glitches a lot anyways so let's blame that seven.
5317400 Sadly, I haven't started yet. I mean, I have the mental outline in my head, but I've not gotten a chance to sit down and write uninterrupted for very long, and by the time I have, I have been too tired to focus. Been kind of a busy week. I could have worked on it a bit this evening, but I've imbibed a bit tonight, so I don't trust my writing faculties very much. Plus there's again tiredness. Hopefully, come the weekend, I'll have something to show.
Another great chapter! Though I am rather curious about the things you introduced in this chapter. Changes such as Celestia & Luna being the size of small children, as just one strange thing.
Still it was a worthy chapter and I really look forward to reading more! <3
5349407 C'mon, if you were an immortal and a being of great power and stature, wouldn't you take on a less imposing form to make people comfortable in an informal situation?
Holy hell, how did I not read this sooner?! Oh wait, probably the past few months of weekly thunderstorms and the pain I get as they build (my body being more accurate than most weathermen) is why I didn't notice. >.> Also - Is that a Tucker the Equinine (or his Beta, the Equiknot, which I have >.>) from BadDrag that Dee stores in that box?! Still, good story and I don't mind being skipped over as a editor - no problems noticed in this chapter!
oh wow I totally missed the update notice for this story in my feed. Good thing my "Gosh, I miss reading this story. I wonder if they have a blog or something about a possible update or something" after talking about a few stories in the skype chat about Button Mash in stories.
It was such a nice 'fluff' chapter. Great followup to the last one. We finally got to meet Luna and Celestia! That was really unexpected to see them in their childish forms. That cop lady was nice, though all that pressure on Sweetie Belle lol poor thing is starting to feel like everyone assumes she's responsible for Dee now. xD
That Rich and Silver Platter moment. I'm starting to wonder if that asexual person is one Sweetie Belle said to stay away. Would explain the whole "I only like watching" comment in the prequel.
Anyhow, this chapter was a pleasant surprise for me today. Thanks for taking the time to put this one out. I can't wait to see who the roommate she gets might be.
5409904 I am actually sitting on the next chapter, and have been for a little while now. Unfortunately, one of my editors had taken ill in between first and second pass, and I have been... hesitant to post it with the job half finished, you know? Needless to say, though, the next chapter is ripe with awkwardness, character introductions, and laying the foundation for part of the plot arc.
So on a scale of 1 to expelled TO THE MOON! how screwed are DT and SS?
Dinky.
5303860 Nope.
5303882
Rumble
5303885 Actually, one of the other CMCs is present. Scootaloo was actually mentioned in a Sweetie Belle centric section a few chapters back. She just didn't register in Dee's mind for some reason.
5303923 Even if he was asexual, he probably would not be in the women's dorm.
5303948
Button shouldn't be in the Women's Dorm either.
5303973
Maybe Rumble was never male to begin with
It IS a thing
5303981 I was looking at that myself and thinking I might rehash it to give her a softer brown.
5303991
I believe there is a moviie, cannot remember what it is called, but it was a little girl who made herself look like a guy because she was uncomfortable with herself. It wasn't until mid-teens that she finally came out and went back to being tomboy
5304013
Insight is useful, imagination is key
5304001 Whenever I've pictured characters while writing, they've had a thick enough coat that it determined their color,, but thin enough in sensitive areas, like fingertips, areola and nipple, or pubic areas to not be a nuisance, and also not make shaving pubic areas too bizarre.
really glad to see this fic update. i was getting worried.
the suspense!
I'm guessing Twist or Scootaloo.
I'm guessing Dee's gonna room with Sweetie.
I love this story Seven Fates! I am a transgender girl who started transitioning in the summer, I think this story was one of the things that finally pushed me over to come out. I am so glad that you are attempting to tell this story as tastefully as you can. I also like the erotic scenes though, super hot! If you ever need any first hand experiences I will be glad to share :)
5305248 If my story has encouraged you to come out and begin transition, it pleases me to hear my work has helped push someone in the direction of happiness, regardless of whatever hardships they face. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story thus far, and I wish you the best in your endeavors.
Twist.
5304612
Probably not, Sweetie said the roomate is asexual, Sweetie is ... not
5305953 I didn't say Sweetie.
5306198 I think nekosune meant Twist, who already has a roommate.
5306198 sorry I misreplied meant to reply to
5305003
5306225 I meant to make that reply to
5305003
Ah yes, an update to my favorite story. And a good update too! (albeit a bit short) But hey! Good to see you are alive and well!
I do believe we have met this character before. I'm not sure where, but I'm probably gonna give myself a good hard kick in the flank if i don't remember.
keep it up!
this story is good it makes me happy for some reason
Gotta say, I was never a fan of slice of life stories, but this really keeps my attention. To my knowledge, transitioning is something that plays havoc on the mind, particularly when you don't use a doctor who will give you prescriptions so your brain chemistry doesn't become unbalanced due to the hormones. It is almost to the point that your perspectives and even a bit of your personality is shifting even as you are processing everything else you normally do. Add in Snips and Snails along with the douche at the arcade, you get a hell of a traumatic experience. At first I thought Dee would move in with Sweetie, but now I'm interested in who this asexual character is.
Just a wild guess. Maud?
Lovely chapter. I am glad I stayed up so late to read it. I actually stumbled across the chapter on accident the first time and it didn't say there was that many new chapters but lo and behold it was under the new ones. I'm not sure why really but my account glitches a lot anyways so let's blame that seven.
5303981 Take a look at the new cover image. Notice any differences?
5317400 Sadly, I haven't started yet. I mean, I have the mental outline in my head, but I've not gotten a chance to sit down and write uninterrupted for very long, and by the time I have, I have been too tired to focus. Been kind of a busy week. I could have worked on it a bit this evening, but I've imbibed a bit tonight, so I don't trust my writing faculties very much. Plus there's again tiredness. Hopefully, come the weekend, I'll have something to show.
5317452 No worse than a drunk chapter, which will hopefully never happen. I've never been drunk once, and I don't aim to start.
5310907 i want this to be a thing, please!
This song has many interpretations, but I think it connects to this story. You can be the judge of that.
Another great chapter! Though I am rather curious about the things you introduced in this chapter. Changes such as Celestia & Luna being the size of small children, as just one strange thing.
Still it was a worthy chapter and I really look forward to reading more! <3
5349407 C'mon, if you were an immortal and a being of great power and stature, wouldn't you take on a less imposing form to make people comfortable in an informal situation?
5310907 No, maud is too old (even though it would be funny). So from all I know it has to be a filly in the show or an OC. Maybe Scoots? Who knows.
5365441
I was just referring the asexual thing. I wonder how scoots would work for that though.
5367348 I would think that's pretty obvious. She just doesn't feel sexual or romantic attractions to anybody.
5367348 I know, and I would have loved to read that :P
Holy hell, how did I not read this sooner?! Oh wait, probably the past few months of weekly thunderstorms and the pain I get as they build (my body being more accurate than most weathermen) is why I didn't notice. >.>
Also - Is that a Tucker the Equinine (or his Beta, the Equiknot, which I have >.>) from BadDrag that Dee stores in that box?!
Still, good story and I don't mind being skipped over as a editor - no problems noticed in this chapter!
oh wow I totally missed the update notice for this story in my feed. Good thing my "Gosh, I miss reading this story. I wonder if they have a blog or something about a possible update or something" after talking about a few stories in the skype chat about Button Mash in stories.
It was such a nice 'fluff' chapter. Great followup to the last one. We finally got to meet Luna and Celestia! That was really unexpected to see them in their childish forms. That cop lady was nice, though all that pressure on Sweetie Belle lol poor thing is starting to feel like everyone assumes she's responsible for Dee now. xD
That Rich and Silver Platter moment. I'm starting to wonder if that asexual person is one Sweetie Belle said to stay away. Would explain the whole "I only like watching" comment in the prequel.
Anyhow, this chapter was a pleasant surprise for me today. Thanks for taking the time to put this one out. I can't wait to see who the roommate she gets might be.
5409904 I am actually sitting on the next chapter, and have been for a little while now. Unfortunately, one of my editors had taken ill in between first and second pass, and I have been... hesitant to post it with the job half finished, you know? Needless to say, though, the next chapter is ripe with awkwardness, character introductions, and laying the foundation for part of the plot arc.
5410338 i, for one qould not kind it being posted, then later "fixed" up with spelling errors and such, but im just one person, i cant speak for all.
Officer Shield? Why does the name Gleaming Shield pop to mind?
Finally! A story featuring an asexual that I didn't have to specifically look for! Unfortunately smut was in the same story, but minor evil I guess.