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6693303 Damn, throughout this story I had hoped his injury was not debilitating, but now it sounds the opposite of that.
it might take my a while to get to this. One of my favorite fics just updated and i'm re reading it right now.
Finally got caught up. There are so many times when I finished a chapter that I thought "This would be a great place to end the story," but my next thought was always "But there's still some stuff that hasn't been talked about yet!" At first I was hesitant to start reading this because it's still incomplete and it's so long, and you have several shorter fics, but I finished it and now I can start on the Iron Will/Fluttershy one.
Like a well-written character, this story has some flaws (only minor stuff like grammar, spelling, a few plot points I would have said were questionable), but all that's nothing compared to how well it's written overall. I got the feels several times, and that's always a win in my book.
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Thanks! I sometimes wonder if people pick up on all the little (pretentious?) things I put in the stories. Glad to know some people are thinking about them!
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I like seeing this sort of thing, too, since I feel it gives characters more depth. Plus, in any serious relationship, it's important for both parties to both support each other and feel comfortable enough to show weakness around each other.
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Dang, that was fast! Thanks for picking it up, and I'm happy that you found something to enjoy. The next chapter comes out this Saturday, and I hope you'll keep reading.
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I used to hate how often my English teachers insisted on symbolism. A Tale of Two Cities, for example, a noble's carriage speeds toward a red sunset, a cask of red wine gets spilled in the streets, red, red, red. It's all red! Maybe red was just Dickens's favorite color.
Even though I didn't like the overemphasis, it was pretty much ingrained in my mind to take notice of something as repetitious as the reflections and mirrors were in the early chapters. And I don't think it's that pretentious; it was in character for Soarin', after all, to like looking at himself
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I'll be honest: besides the reflection in the beer, I didn't put as much thought into the mirror symbolism as maybe I've led you to believe. Some of the other things in the story, though? Totally. (Soarin's parlor, anyone?) At the very least, though, I hope I'm more subtle than Charles "NOW I'M GOING TO WRITE THE WORD 'BLOOD' WITH TEH WINE CUZ TEH WINE REPRESENTS BLOOD DO YOU GET IT???" Dickens.
Aaaand, now you've gotten me started on Dickens.
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No worries! I hope you like it when you get to it. Which story just updated, if you don't mind me asking?
6821648 An Escort's Journal. Just a heads up, lots of NSFW stuff (especially in the beginning). I really like it, but it updates really slowly unfortunately. I actually just wrapped it up, and i'll probably read your new chapter sometime tomorrow.
Pretty good chapter. The chapters set in the present are a little weird for me. I enjoy them as much as the ones set in the past, but something draws me to the ones set in the present. I think it's the contrast between Soarin then and now as well as the reminder that there isn't a happy ending. I also don't think i've run across the format before (or at least very often). Still a really good fic and I really enjoy it. And I never thought I'd say this but the shameless plug was a good thing. Apparently, I forgot to follow Fire streak and then I forgot about it. Now it's on my read later list.
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Glad you like it! And thanks for letting me know about the present-tense format. It's a bit experimental, and using the meta-story has been a balancing act this entire time. There's going to be a new chapter on Saturday (assuming I don't get distracted by An Escort's Journal - thanks for the link!), which will be a bit beefier than this one.
Enjoy Fire Streak when you get around to it! Happy to hear that the shameless self-promotion wasn't a huge waste.
6825372 I think I found a better way to explain how I feel about the scenes in the present. They make me want to see what happened more. I don't get caught up in the narrative. Every time I get swept up in the romance (as flawed as the relationship is), I'm jerked out of the relationship and reminded of what happened. But it definitely is a balance act.
Excellent, I'm glad to hear a new chapter is coming out soon. I'll probably start Fire Streak tomorrow, although I shouldn't procrastinate all day...like Friday afternoon...and Saturday afternoon...and Sunday...and this afternoon.
So it sounds like you're enjoying An Escorts Journal. It's a really good fic.
I hope this doesn't end the way I don't want it to end
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Yay! Someone caught on!
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You'll have to keep reading to find out. Fortunately, there's another chapter coming out on Saturday, so you'll get to see the next piece pretty soon.
How do you want it to end?
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I hope for a good satisfying ending. :)
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I'll do my best to make it satisfying, regardless of whether it's happy or sad, and I hope you'll see it through to the end.
I am somehow confused. i don't know how, but i think its because i haven't read any chapter of sensation for soooo long.
Now i have plenty of time to read it again... 12 hours of absolute pleasure, maybe even more.
Anyway nice chapter keep up the great work you are doing.
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Aw, sorry you're confused. It's my job to make my story easy to follow. I'll try harder with that.
6839568 no no no you dont have to its just that i have read a lot of different stories after "Four words" and its all mixed up for me. i just need to read it all again and it will be fine.
So they....left it? Broke up?? I though Braeburn had died during Soarin's incident
I didn't know there was a side story to this! I'll have to add that to my read it later list. The perspective of Fire Streak in all of this would certainly be interesting to see once I finish this story.
Well, I’m glad Braeburn didn’t die somehow, and that’s how the relationship ended. I know there’s not a “death” tag on the story or anything, but that’s all my mind could think about as to why they split up.
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You're a very astute reader. I wanted that to be a possibility in the reader's mind for the first half of the story, but few people commented that they thought it might be the case.