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Amazing. Simply amazing. You've had me for months with this story. This goes beyond fan fiction, this is real literature. Keep up the good work!
Ah yeah! A new chapter from one of my favorite authors.
great chapter one again, can't wait to see how Soran mother scene.
Hmm. Firestreak and Spitfire, I like it.
There are few things better than to wake up and find a notification about a new Sensation chapter in your inbox, and then actually having the time to dive right in.
For the time being the story hasn't been taken in the direction I had initially been fearing. It's had it tense moments in previous chapter, but after having been resolved in an awesome way Sensation has continued throughout this chapter in a more heartwarming direction, tying earlier events as well as Fire streak's side story together real nicely and focusing instead on developing existing friendships.
I liked Spitfire and Fire Streak's return to the story and their characters quite a bit. The way you've decided to write Spitfire specifically in her position, with her chosen isolation, in contrast to Firestreak and Soarin's more outgoing personalities appeals to me quite a bit, though I cannot say if this is from an empathetic origin or that her relationship with Firestreak is a nice contrast to Soarin' and Braeburn, or rather how Soarin used to be. In any case Firefire is cute ship ^^
Soarin's reactions to Spitfire had me both rolling my eyes and giggling.
I also have to admit that I've grown to Like Holly all the more this chapter. With the sneak peak in previous journal entry I had feared her presence to be potential cause for complications, but instead her addition to the story was quite the memorable moment ^^.
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Saw this comment when I first woke up this morning, and it made me smile. Great to start the day with such high praise. Thanks for reading!
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Eee! Thanks! Hope you liked it!
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Keep reading to find out.
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I do, too. The actual name of the ship is another issue entirely.
7063279 spitstreak lol. Spitfire is hard. I put forth fire squared. But that's still bad.
7063279 Hmm, FireFire or SpitStreak. I see what you mean. If I may suggest an alternative: "Co-Captain, My Captain". It's a bit long, though.
I'm gonna be honest, I forgot you'd told me at supper yesterday that it would update last night. Part of it might be due to the fact that that was mentioned earlier on and we'd talked about so much! A great chapter regardless, bringing back previous moments (Holli and calling her the wrong name, which I'd also forgotten until I read this chapter) and forshadowing what we all know is going to happen but you have us all on the edge of our seats wondering when it will ("He didn't say 'us.'").
I think I found a mistake:
It reads well in a country accent, but considering Holli's the one who says it, I'm guessing a word was accidentally omitted.
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There are few things better than hearing that your friends like your work.
Glad you like the direction this has gone and that you're enjoying Double-Fire (?). Like you said, there are definitely some contrasts with Soarin' and how he does things. And I like Holli, too. I'm glad I was able to bring her back. Thanks!
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I like "Co-captain, My Captain," but yeah, it doesn't really roll off the tongue. I'm going to go with Double-Fire for now and see how that sounds.
Thanks for catching that mistake! I'd added that sentence after NCG proofread it, so I didn't have the benefit of a second set of eyes. It should be fixed now.
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I'm thinking "Double-Fire," but maybe "Fire Square," could be something? I dunno, I'm not cut out for this.
7063866 yeah, this one is hard. i'm not entirely sure.
I think I haven't favorited this yet because I'd decided earlier not to favorite anything until they're complete. It has been remedied, and should have been a long time ago.
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Happy to have you on board! Now you'll get updates! Yay updates!!!
See, things are going so well right now, I’m just dreading when things eventually fall apart.