Thought to be dead for over a year, Equestria is stunned when Rainbow Dash returns, having been made the slave of a sadistic griffon for the past year. Her friends are understandably overjoyed, but can they handle the nearly broken pegasus?
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Too soon for Romance isn't it? Still loving this. 3 chapters in 1 day THANK YOU SO MUCH!
I was honestly expecting the griffin to be Gilda, come to see if rainbow was okay, feeling bad that the last time they'd spoken she'd said such horrible things to the Pegasus, and wanting to make up for it after what her own kind had done to rainbow.
I like this story as for what is happening to RD Let me put it as I would if I was IC (In Character) in my Chatroom:
*Golden Eyes Glow Brightly as I flex the claws on ALL my paws and bare my fangs with a deep rumbling Growl escaping* target LOCKED, MInotaurs are now PREY!!!
4358909 Its never too soon for romance!
Damn. Now I want FleetDustDashFire ship!
Dash x ALL THE MARES!
I really hope Lighting Dust survived, even if FleetDustDashFire doesn't happen, she could still be a good friend for Rainbow Dash.
4358909. Hehe, dont worry. It will be a good while before true romance
Gotta be honest.
There's a line between justice, and unjustified torture with revenge as an excuse.
This treatment crossed it, especially since they don't even know what she was doing and they're already threatening with a freaking death penalty.
What the heck.
4359635. I'm still deciding on the ship. Spitfire/Dash will happen, but if you all want more I can certainly add... one more. Later on. ;)
4360227 OK!
-FleetDashFire 4ever!
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Well, as was alluded to before, Luna and her Night Guard have very much become... colder, with the supposed death of Rainbow Dash, and an ongoing slavery/foalnapping crisis in Equestria.
Not that what Luna did was entirely justified, but one can understand where she is coming from. Especially since they are assuming the griffon may have been coming for Rainbow Dash again, AND just possibly fatally wounded a Wonderbolt.
4360227 no shipping. shipping would be rather unecessary. and i highly doubt she is into relationships at the moment all things considered.
4367600 No. Shipping is needed. A relationship is indeed a sign of moving on and reclaiming ones life
Not to mention that the author originally made this story to be a SpitDash ship fic at some point
-FleetDashFire 4ever!
Just a quick question,
Is Discord reformed in this fic? And if yes do we get to see him reacting to the abuse his dear Flutters foalhood friend had to endure?
Otherwise: at times got a bit of rushed sence, but overall definately a fic which deserves a bit more attention. Keep up the good work
How long until Scootaloo comes to visit her honorary big sister? And I nominate the Minotaur ambassador for a Darwin Award, won't last long if he thinks insulting the Princess of the Sun's friends and defending a slave camp in her backyard.
Dang and breeze you can be very scary when you want to be if your reaction to chapter three is any indication. Got me Scared just reading the comment. Oddly enough this story s reminding me of a story I stopped writing a month ago. I called it broken rainbows and wings of fire. Basically it's similar to this only dash was kidnapped by blue blood for revenge on the disastrous gala incident. Two months later and spitfire regretting her actions with dash finds her. Ieven gave Celestia her own version of nightmare moon. Solar flare. Imagine Celestia in twilight's flame rage shift. Just turn the white the colors of fire when you imagine it. Yeah my imagination scares me sometimes.
4399480 He is! And don't worry, I have plans for him, but he's a tad busy with a certain buttery pegasus to be contemplating revenge for his friend at this moment.
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his story is getting intrusting
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Think about it like this, Rainbow is an emotional wreck. She's been beaten, abused, and torn apart mentally. She was borderline tortured, probably raped rather often for an entire year. She's completely and utterly broken, and now that she's feeling just a little kindness for the first time after an entire year of abuse, she latches onto it with everything she's got.
Right now, I think her budding feelings are a product of desperation; a desperation fuelled by her fear that her "happiness" will only be temporary.
Dual wielded AA-12s loaded with buck-shot are needed!
4361013 I beleive this. Rd is among those that saved her from herself and accepted her, thus the mane 6 are precious to her. If she has to go a bit Nightmare Moon to protect them she will. Heck in Rights of Accesion she goes full Nightmare Moon to defend Twilight.
And face it these guys manage to not only take an Element of Harmony but do it within hours of Canterlot itself. THat strikes home.
4358909 What I think is happening with Rainbow Dash is that she is feeling emotional attached to the first pony she saw when she was rescued. It may develop into romance down the road, but right now Rainbow is latching on to any good feeling she can get.
Seems to be missing Princess Cadence with the rest of the Alicorns.
4359515 * slings great sword over shoulder* The hunt begins.
6761576 Go read a story called
Soldier of Magic. Done? Good.
*Insane smile of joy* Na, just call in CTS....
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Where's Cadance?
Shotguns?! I didn’t think buzzards were so brutal when it comes to close-quarters combat.
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The Crystal Empire. Duh.