Thought to be dead for over a year, Equestria is stunned when Rainbow Dash returns, having been made the slave of a sadistic griffon for the past year. Her friends are understandably overjoyed, but can they handle the nearly broken pegasus?
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lol refresh the page and see this has updated. This shall be a good morning!
Note: Im not exactly sure what just happened at the end there...
Did her water just brake or something?
4556236 Her water broke. Which means.........
Foal inbound!
4556245 I'm thinking so.
Get that girl to the hospital! ASAP!!!
What would a half-griffin half-pony hybrid be called in this universe anyway?
Isn't rape a bit touchy of a subject to use? Won't say it is used badly here but still its touchy.
4556372 They are usually refered to as Hippogiffs.
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I thought that was the case, that was more for the author, I was asking if Taelea had chosen something different.
4556463 Hippogriffs
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I think it would be like a hippogriff from Harry Potter.
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Yes it's touchy, but considering we're eleven chapters into this, it's a little late to complain about the story themes.
4556559 just read the story today.
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You know, Rainbow should really see a counselor after her kid is born, you know, to get over any anxiety she still has about him/her. Fluttershy would also be a big help I bet.
So much love in the air!
Also wondering what the ending meant.
Was it an "AHHHHHHH!" in delight/adorableness (Awwwww)?
Or was it an "AHHHHHHHH!" OF ANGER! (or despair) ?
Aldso what ever happened to Lightning Dust? Is she still o\in the hospital?
OR WAS THAT HER YELLING! She is full of despair know thinking her love for Rainbow Dash will never be returnedjergjnsojbvnowrjgnowejrnvlkwdvlmsng
Splash?
Uh oh...BABY ON THE WAAAAAAAY!
4556792 It was a scream of OH GODDESS WHAT DO WE DO!?!?!
And Lightning Dust shall return! She's still recovering.
I can just see Fleetfoot and Spitfire breaking the sound barrier to get Rainbow to the hospital ASAP. You know, there will be lots of chaos over the birth with Rainbow's friends swarming around... would anyone notice Discord peeking in through a window and using that chaos to make sure things go smoothly for the mother and foal???
4556903 lol. I just reread this chapter and now I completely understand.
I must be tired to not have seen that and made the connection!
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Speaking of characters we haven't seen in a while, whatever happened to Gilda? Can we have a chapter with some of the other ponies (and other associated sentients) that were also rescued making an appearance (maybe at a hospital or something, under guard for their own protection while they recover and reconnect with relatives and whatnot)? Also, I forgot to say it earlier, but that was really funny how you ended the chapter, and it's nice to see Rainbow so happy. Hopefully things will look up a bit from here on in!
Well, now I can't wait for the next chapter. We get to see dash's... Foal? Fledgling? Either way, we get to see her baby
Bring out the next chapter soon please
This is good I can't even stay still I'm totally itching to see the next chapter
what what i have to go back and read the last cuple of chapters to understand what going on
4637339 hmm , makes sense, I can buy that.
Brilliant, brilliant. Love the herd and perfect baby timing.
I've got one question... Where's Spike at? We have yet to see him make an appearance.
Spike is the major accountant and assistant to the Aurora Guard, and their secret weapon. Once things heat up, he'll make his appearance. And it will be glorious.
4724744 Cloud walking spell.
4724779 point taken
Can't saint for more chapters
I apologize to everyone for the length of time in new chapters. There was an accident at work, and a bad infection, and I've been recovering from them.
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Politics, my dear. While Equestria is powerful, and the Celestial Sisters near gods in their own right, war only means suffering for their ponies. Plus, bluntly, slavery hasn't hit them personally till now.
Also! I will be writing out that sex scene as a "side story."
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Sorry I didn't answer earlier, I somehow missed your reply. Yeah, I kinda guessed it was something like that, that Celestia wouldn't want to spend lives to save others, especially if those lives were innocent, or that the issue hadn't become a problem for Equestria until recently, and no doubt she was focusing on the griffins more. What did Rainbow Dash mean by "those deadbeats from Guards"? When are you gonna update this and "Beats of Life" again? Don't get me wrong, you have other stories I like, but you kinda left both of these on big cliffhangers.
WHY DID U STOP!?
Please keep going!
What is up with all this Ditzy and Twilight stuff? Is there another story in this universe that I'm missing that explains this? I am dying to know.
Also, what happened to one chapter a week per story? Did life get in the way?
5045183 Life and work, I'm afraid. I'm working on the nextchapter as we speak, though!
I'm actually sorta sad that you stopped where you did with Dash, Spits and Fleetfoot. You capture emotion so well, and I think that you could have written a really good clop scene. Those were always my favourite ones, the clopscenes where one of the participants had had a bad experience with sex, but they had someone they trusted to hold their hand (or hoof) and guide them through it. To make "new memories", as dash said. It's not because it's clop, but because it shows the point where they let go of their fear. These clopscenes are incredibly rare, though, so it made me sad that you stopped when I honestly think you could have written the best one yet.
Either way, this is a great fic, and you should be proud of it.
I agree with him here. A clop seen here could've been really emotional (besides lust. I mean love and DAWWWW, fucking retards).
Uh oh, baby’s coming!!!
Stupid Water. You broke during the heartfelt moment.
Oh God. That sure was something. I like that sudden scream at the end of the chapter. You could really hear that moment of silence before Rainbow screamed. My goodness.