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rainwater12


I love to write, draw, and do other artistic things. FIMfiction is giving me a chance to write my own stories about one of my favorite shows, My Little Pony; Friendship is Magic!

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Note- ponies in this story are Level 3 Anthro
After a horrifying attack of ponies gone mad, Ponyville is left in ruins. Rainbow Dash is left with a broken wing and Scootaloo in her care, the filly orphaned during the attack. And if her task wasn't difficult enough, Fluttershy, Applejack, Twilight, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Applebloom and Sweetie Belle had gone missing, all either injured after the attack or worse.
Now Rainbow and Scootaloo must leave their shelter to find their friends before the monsters of Ponyville destroy them all.
But there are many other dangers besides the mad ponies, the Everfree forest has begun to grow into Ponyville, allowing the monsters within it's tree's roam free.
Unable to fly, Rainbow Dash must face these terrors with Scootaloo by her side.
But how long can a mare's sanity, much less a filly's last in such a dark, twisted, and corrupt world? And how is a pony supposed to defend herself with only a katana, a gun, and a limited amount of bullets. And even more important, how is a pony supposed to find seven missing ponies when they all may be out to kill her?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )
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>Apocalypse

The title of this story didn't tell me what was going on. :trollestia:

Anyway, it was fairly alright. Keep writing and we'll see where it goes.

4714436 I made the title vague on purpose.:trollestia:
I have a big plan for where the story goes. (Spoilers: It is going to be awesome. :rainbowdetermined2:)

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4714451

Heh, well, good luck man. You've been on the site for a while, so I won't do my "veteran writer" talk here and now, lol. I'm actually planning on releasing something big fairly soon, myself.

So, um... Is "Apocalypse" spelled incorrectly on purpose? At first I thought this was going to be a comedy where everyone comes down with speech impediments.

4714472 ...:facehoof: Darnit, I spelled the title wrong. Thanks for pointing that out, that would've been embarassing.:twilightsmile:

Looks good so far. I like it, and I will be watching it.:ajsmug:

Oh, and consider yourself followed, as well.:ajsmug::rainbowkiss:

And on the subject of misspelling things, I think that you misspelled "katana" in the story-description above, as well.

See?

with only a katanna, a gun,

*sobs* no not scootaloo's mum:raritycry: I can't beleive it. This is really good and very tragic.

Keep up the good work... WAHHH :raritydespair:

4714451 Hey, rainwater, is it alright if I do a reading of your FanFiction? I'll make sure to link you in the video and link it here! :scootangel:

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