• Member Since 8th Mar, 2013
  • offline last seen Feb 24th, 2015

Swimmingly

Like a neglected and dejected pup, I roam. Also known as Swimmingly "Herr Direktor" Choppingston.

Swimmingly Joined 8th Mar, 2013 · Offline

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Sparkers16
Sparkers16 #1 · Apr 26th, 2014 · · ·
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This was actually kind of funny. It wasn't bad. But PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE get a proofreader. There are so many errors in here it hurts my eyes.
6 out of 10.

DawnSkies
DawnSkies #3 · May 4th, 2014 · · ·
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Actually entertaining, but like Sparkers16 said:
4291161

Proof reading would of been needed. But other than that it was a nice short read...

ADFX-NightRaven414
ADFX-NightRaven414 #4 · Jan 21st, 2015 · · ·
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pretty good yet re read before posting:fluttercry: is my advice but a REALLY GOOD read nonetheless! :pinkiehappy:

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