• Member Since 8th Mar, 2013
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Swimmingly


Like a neglected and dejected pup, I roam. Also known as Swimmingly "Herr Direktor" Choppingston.

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A war has been going on, for as long as anyone can remember,
Equestria is no longer a beautiful country, now merely a desert, a stage for combat.
The resistance, once led by the Elements of harmony, is fighting a loosing battle.

The elements themselves, tried as traitors and banished, outcasts.


Can they be reunited in time to save the day, or will Equestria fall.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Lol this story sucks

I wouldn't say it was that bad, it just needs an editor. :eeyup:

Check for capitalization on Twilight and Spike, or any of the characters for that matter.

Are you new to writing?

4234378 new to fanfic and online writing I'm used to using pen and paper.

4234400 That is what I did before I discovered online writing, you'll get better with time. :eeyup:

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