Discord's Love

by MelodySketch

Insecure

"Um...hello D-Discord." Fluttershy quietly said as yet another shiver ran down her spine.

"Hello Fluttershy.." The draconequues stated awkwardly. "May I come in?"

"Um.. yes, of course." The yellow mare politely said as she opened the door. Discord entered and sat down on the sofa as Fluttershy asked. "W-would you like some tea?"

"Sure." the draconequues said as Fluttershy set a kettle on the stove. She slowly began to walk towards the couch when Discord made her stop dead in her tracks.

"I know you are scared of me." He said. She could tell that there was disappointment in his voice. "I know that I have done more than my share of evi-chaotic things. Including.."

He paused.

"Spying on you." Fluttershy held back a gasp. "You were spying on me??" She asked. "Why??" The draconequues hesitated. "Oh, I don't know.." He lied.

"I like to see what ponies are doing around here. You weren't the first, trust me." Fluttershy didn't know what to say. She knew he was lying. But she didn't know the actual truth.

There was a quite awkward silence.

Discord spoke up. "Well, I must be going." He hopped up from the sofa that he was sitting on. "Um, goodbye." the draconequues said as he left.

What just happened? Fluttershy thought as she removed the now singing tea kettle from the stove.

"What do you think I should do Angel?" The yellow mare asked as she turned to her little bunny. "I should tell Twilight. "She said as she started running to Twilight's treehouse once again.

Comments

[cosmicobubisi]

Hmmm. Can you make Discord be a bit more... chaotic? The two characters (especially Discord) seem a bit dulled down. Also, two things bother me. Fluttershy keeps running to friends for help. This is taking an approach that she is a weakling, and can't do anything by herself, which is not true. The second thing is that the chapters a re short. A little length never hurt anypony. Good luck!

[Dr midnight]

please tell me this is fluttercord