Oooh... I fail at reading comprehension today. For some reason I thought you had said "worth a shot". Herp de derp.
It was originally a one-shot, but I got encouragement and had a few more ideas, so I'm extending it. The first chapter stands alone, whereas the second chapter is meant to go somewhere.
452333 Yeah, I know how that goes, when you read something and it looks like something different from what it actually is. It usually happens to me when I've been up late. Sounds like you've got a bad case of... :rainbowsunglasses: ...tired eyes.
this is really good I like your writing ability and I feel this Page was very solid and filled with interesting Parts (the fact that I love Luna helps as well)
and here i was thinking this was a one shot.
glad to know i was wrong.
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Would you care to elaborate on what you didn't like?
452248 oh no, im not saying i didn't like it, im just saying last i saw this it was marked “complete”
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Oooh... I fail at reading comprehension today. For some reason I thought you had said "worth a shot". Herp de derp.
It was originally a one-shot, but I got encouragement and had a few more ideas, so I'm extending it. The first chapter stands alone, whereas the second chapter is meant to go somewhere.
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yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes...
Thank you
Not bad. I like the ambiguity of Dusk's feelings and his fretting over the situation. It'll be interesting to see how this goes.
452333 Don't worry about it. It happens to the best of us.
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Yeah, I know how that goes, when you read something and it looks like something different from what it actually is. It usually happens to me when I've been up late. Sounds like you've got a bad case of...
:rainbowsunglasses:
...tired eyes.
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Zing!
this is really good I like your writing ability and I feel this Page was very solid and filled with interesting Parts (the fact that I love Luna helps as well)