I almost want to see a sequel, kinda on how Duskwind (probably since she had laid claim on him?) becomes a consort to Luna, but not quite sure yet. Think you'd be up to it?
I am toying with that idea, if there is enough interest. I imagine that Celestial would be rather petulant, if she can have any pony she fancies EXCEPT one, even if she wasn't particularly set on him originally. It seems like there are some story possibilities there.
I there were to be anything of a truly adult nature, I'd also stick it in a "deleted scene" like I did with this one.
Second the request for more, with or with out the adult scenes. While I don't see Celestia trying to take back Duskwind, namely because Luna has actual feelings for him. I can see her going Trolestia teasing Luna and Duskwind to no end or seeing how many different shades of pink she can get them to turn.
why was this funny to me
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It was MEANT to be funny, for the most part.
401457 i lold way more then needed too!
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Good. I've tried to be a bit sexy AND funny.
I almost want to see a sequel, kinda on how Duskwind (probably since she had laid claim on him?) becomes a consort to Luna, but not quite sure yet. Think you'd be up to it?
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I am toying with that idea, if there is enough interest. I imagine that Celestial would be rather petulant, if she can have any pony she fancies EXCEPT one, even if she wasn't particularly set on him originally. It seems like there are some story possibilities there.
I there were to be anything of a truly adult nature, I'd also stick it in a "deleted scene" like I did with this one.
Sure, just thought the idea was good enough that a sequel wouldn't be unwarrented. And you left the ending open enough.
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Thanks for the encouragement!
Second the request for more, with or with out the adult scenes. While I don't see Celestia trying to take back Duskwind, namely because Luna has actual feelings for him. I can see her going Trolestia teasing Luna and Duskwind to no end or seeing how many different shades of pink she can get them to turn.
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Huh. Any particular part, or the whole thing? It was more or less meant to be a flash fiction around a silly idea.
I third the request for a sequel! This is fantastic work, good sir.
And silly it may be, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I think it's amazing how you didn't even reference the sexual organs during the sex scene.
I loved this it was exactly how I would picture it the way we see the awkwardness and the way the two of them get along bravo