Skylight and Teleportation
The mare walk to Starshine and look at her worriedly she lend her hoof "here let me help you." said the mare as she smiled.
"Go away! I don't need your help!" cried Starshine still cowering.
"Come on I won't hurt you and also you might stop being like that or the ponies will laugh at you again." stated the mare as she stared at Starshine.
Then Starshine look at the mare "y-you won't h-hurt me?" said Starshine still tears in her eyes.
"I won't I promise." stated the mare as she hug Starshine.
Starshine was shocked the mare hug her if it's like she's her friend but though she hug her back for she need comfort.
Then the mare broke the hug then she lend a handkerchief and Starshine accepted it.
"T-Thank you." Starshine smiled as she accepted the handkerchief and wiped her tears, "anyway who are you?"
"Oh I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Skylight but you can call me Sky." Skylight smiled.
"Hello Sky nice to meet you." Starshine smiled "I'm Starshine but you can call me Star." Starshine once again smiled.
"Ok Star can you be my friend?" Skylight smiled.
"F-Friend?" Starshine raise an eyebrow.
"Yes." Skylight smiled as she lend her hoof.
"I don't know but if it make you happy then sure." Starshine accepted her hoof "you know your the first friend I ever had." Starshine look Skylight.
"Really why?" Skylight ask sadly.
"Because everpony always bullied me, and I always wrote fanfics so I don't always go outside my house." Starshine said sadly.
"You wrote fanfics? oh how I love to read fanfics!" Skylight exclaim happily.
"Wow, I could bring you one tomorrow." Starshine smiled then her stomach growls "oops, hungry..." Starshine smile awkwardly.
Skylight giggled "come you will be my snack buddy!" Skylight said as they walk to the canteen.
"I like your Cutie Mark, it's an exact copy of a skylight no wonder you got your name, but how did you get that?" Starshine ask Skylight.
"Well my Mom said I got this cutie mark when I was born she said that I glowed bright just as the sky's light." Skylight replied.
"Wow that's pretty for a Cutie Mark and she's right you do glow like the sky's light." Starshine smiled at Skylight.
"Thanks, I was quite popular to my class." Skylight said.
"I wish I had a Cutie Mark." Starshine frowned.
"Oh don't be sad I know you could get one someday." Skylight said happily.
"I hope but thank you." Starshine smiled as they ate together.
Then the bell rang
"Well see you later." Skylight waved her hoof as she walk to her classroom.
"Ok." Starshine waved her hoof too as she walk to her classroom.
"Ok class today we will having a Teleportation Test." Sweetie Belle stated at the class.
"Teleportation Test?! I don't know a magic yet! oh no! I will failed this test!! Starshine panicked as the class walk to the field of the school.
Starshine saw Skylight and together they wave at each other though Starshine still worried about the test.
Then she watch her classmates do well when she didn't realized it was her turn.
"Ok Starshine your turn." Sweetie Belle said to Starshine.
Then Starshine snap out of her thoughts she panicked as she step forward and just stand there.
"Do it now Starshine." Sweetie Belle said to Starshine.
"Oh no ok Starshine just do it you can do it!" Starshine talk to herself as she started concentrating and a glow form from her horn she smiled "I can do it! I can do it! Starshine smiled then she close her eyes as her horn began to glow even brighter but then it suddenly vanish "What?! Oh no I can't do this!!" Starshine mentally screamed then she tried again but failed and then she try and try but fails.
"Ha! you can't even do a telportation! no wonder you don't have a Cutie Mark." mock one of Starshine's classmate.
Then Starshine once again tried but failed.
"Come on Star you can do it!" Skylight mentally cheered.
Starshine then once again tried this time it glows very bright "This is it!" Starshine smiled then it was completely crush as the glow vanish she frowned then she look at Sweetie Belle who was disappointed as she was about to write Starshine's paper, all the class started laughing at Starshine.
"Oh no! poor Star!" Skylight look sad.
Starshine almost cry but crying isn't the answer as she look at Skylight,"No! I won't let my friend look down on me! and hate me!" Starshine said to herself as calm down and close her eyes.
Then after seconds she started opening her eyes and you can see her pupils was change to sparkles again and her horn glowed very brightly that it almost lit half of the fields.
"Woah Star is so amazing!" Skylight look amazed at Starshine and soon all the class even the teacher stared in amazement at Starshine.
Then Starshine let out the spell and suddenly she vanish nowhere to seen.
"Starshine!" shouted Sweetie Belle and Skylight in unison as they gasp.
Meanwhile at Sweet Apples Acres
"AHHHH!!!" Starshine screamed as she plummeted she close her eyes for scared to look at where she was going to crash but was lucky when she fall to a hay bush "oh that was close!" Starshine sigh in relief as she jump off the hay bush and look at her surroundings seeing a very big farm "woah where am I?" Starshine stared.
"Yeehaw!" said a mare who was coming to Starshine.
Sadly for both of them they didn't know they were about to crash into each other.
They both groaned.
"What in tarnation?!" exclaimed the mare who was below Starshine.
"Ouch!" cried Starshine as she stood up "oh sorry I didn't mean that."
"It's ok it's my fault for not looking at the direction." said the mare as she rub the dusted off her coats "the names Fritter what brings ya here?" said Fritter as she lend a hoof at Starshine.
Starshine accepted "oh my name is Starshine but I don't have much time I accidentally teleported here." Starshine panic for she might get trouble.
"Oh why don't ya just teleport back?" Fritter said calmly.
"Oh yeah but I don't think they will believe me I got here." Starshine frowned.
"Fritter who r ya talking too?" said across them as it came closer.
"Oh aunt Applebloom, Starshine accidentally teleported here though she can teleport back to her class the problem is that she doesn't have a proof that she got here." Fritter said to Applebloom.
"hmm.. is ya teacher Sweetie Belle?" Applebloom smirks at Starshine.
"Y-yes but how do you know her??" Starshine look confusedly at Applebloom.
Applebloom chuckles "ya find out soon enough because ya don't have much time so I'm just giving ya this pie." Applebloom smiled at Starshine as she lend the pie to Starshine.
"How's this a proof??" Starshine stared at the pie.
"Trust me when it comes to Sweetie Belle." Applebloom winks at Starshine.
"Ok." Starshine said as she teleported back at the school.
"Oh Sweetie Belle." Applebloom chuckled.
"Woah! I can actually do a teleport!" Starshine happily said as everypony stared at her in shock.
"Starshine! are you ok? and where did you teleport?" Sweetie Belle get's closer to Starshine.
"Yes Miss Belle." Starshine smiled "I got teleport to Sweet Apple Acres."
"You got there?!" Sweetie Belle exclaimed in unbelief as she saw Starshine nodded.
"Hphf!" snorted one of the class "how do you expect us to believe that?" It said as all the class agreed.
"This." Starshine replied flatly as she showed a Pie.
"A pie? Ha! what do you expect us to believe that! maybe you just bought it at the canteen!" mocked the pony.
"Oh I'll let it taste but not you it's Miss Belle the one who's gonna taste it!" Starshine said as she lend the pie to Sweetie Belle.
Then Sweetie Belle scoffed the pie and she stared in shock.
"Uh Miss Belle?" Starshine look worriedly at Sweetie Belle.
"Look! you broke the teacher!" said the pony again.
Starshine frowned but it was changed to confuse as she saw the smile on Sweetie Belle and she spoke.
"It is true! she got to Sweet Apple Acres!" said Sweetie Belle happily.
Starshine smiled happily then the class was shock she got there from here and that far for just a young pony.
"Ok class let's go back to the room so you can see your grade." Sweetie Belle stated as the class went to the room.
"Ok it's already home time but before you go home here's your grade." Sweetie Belle said as she give each of the grades to the class.
Then Starshine look at her grades she was surprised and look happy.
"Oh and remember class there will be a special test and a special guest tomorrow too." stated Sweetie Belle as she watch all of her students left the room.
"Sky! Sky!" Starshine run to Skylight.
"Star!" Skylight smiled as she run to Starshine.
"Hey Sky what grade you got?" Starshine smiled at Skylight.
"I got A!" replied Skylight "how about you?" Skylight was eager to know the grade of Starshine.
"I got A+!" Starshine stated happily.
"Wow! that was high!" Skylight said happily.
"Yeah, at first I thought I can't do it and you hating me." Starshine frowned.
"Oh Star I would never ever do that to my best friend!" Skylight smiled.
"Oh I'm very scared of the test tomorrow!" Starshine said as fear started to form at her face.
"Don't worry Star! I trust you and also I will be there to support you!" Skylight smiled again.
"Thanks Sky your the best friend a pony could had! well see you tomorrow best of luck too!" Starshine smiled as she waved a hoof at Skylight.
"You too! and don't forget the fics!" Skylight shouted as she waved a hoof too.
"Ok!" Starshine shouted back.
At Starshine's house
"Mom! Mom?" Starshine called her mother.
"Yes dear?" Rartiy said as she gets closer to Starshine.
"look I got A+ at the Teleportation Test!" Starshine said proudly.
"Wow darling that was amazing I knew you could do it I am so proud of you!" Rarity said as she hug Starshine, Starshine hugs her back.
"Come now we're having dinner and I know your father will be so happy to you." Rarity smiled.
"Yeah and thanks to my friend I got this grade." Starshine said happily.
"Wow dear, I'm happy for you, you already makes a friend." Rarity smiled at her daughter.
Starshine giggled "wow I didn't take auntie Sweetie Belle is the teacher why didn't you tell me Mom?" Starshine look at her mother.
Oh I was also shock by the new, well if she got home we'll thank her for giving you a high grade now let's eat." Rarity said as she seated at the table.
"Yeah." Starshine smiled "you know mom having a friend is great!" Starshine said happily and she smiled as Rarity nodded at her, "Yep, it was so great."
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I've seen better grammar from toddlers. Pass.
Wow the writing in this is atrocious
I need to find who attempted to teach you English and have them sacked
English writing not your forte is. For is difficult to reading what is you wrote. Much strangeness you use. Thinking maybe English not your language?
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Trust me, I've seen much worse.
4300269 Yeah so have I, just not today
Who says you can't do all of these? I write fanfic and still get pretty good grades.
Looks like Starshine finally got a fic featuring him. Lucky dog.
Of course not. She'd be ugly at that point, or look exactly like Claire. Her looking half-dragon definitely wouldn't work out.
Hilarity ensues.
Somepony's been reading too much Shakespeare.
More Shakespearean speech. You're a far better writer than Shakespeare, though; I'm actually enjoying this story, unlike his plays.
Is... is Starshine an autistic Shakespeare?
I bet she wrote this story. It's certainly written like a self-insert.
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This just gets better and better.
Ah, it looks like autism runs in the family. I thought it might be because of the whole half-pony half-dragon abomination thing she is that caused her to talk like that, but it looks like it's just genetics.
I support you for writing this fic with remarkably human characters. It's not everyone that can write autism believably.
Probably abandonment. Most children feel that when their parents abandon them.
Spike, you stud, you. I didn't know you were into ponies younger than you. Or your own family.
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Sounds like autism. I'm sorry, Rarity dear.
You knew the risks when Spike told you, "I want to come inside, Rarity!" and you let him in out of the rain.
Oh, so unicorns have to be trained as magicians to find their special talent now? Way to set the bar, ya hypocrite.
Oh, yes, yes, you're a very good writer.
What? Who would make fun of you for your terrible grammar? Those scoundrels!
If that's her special talent, why are you sending her to school?
Because real talent doesn't happen until you reach a certain age.
Someone go get Meeester. He's not that busy.
My blank flank brings all the colts to the yard and they're like, "Oh. How depressing."
She's literally the only pony in her entire class without a cutie mark. Wow, that's surprising.
How dare they laugh at the autist.
That's just not okay in today's society!
Thank you, mystery teacher, for standing up for her. Celestia knows she can't do it herself.
Her aunt has no clue who the new student is?
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what
who is the guest
i must know
The same reason that he's at school for having shitty grammar.
Only one ear, though.
Do we have a romance tag?
We do not have a romance tag!
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You better fix this to have a romance tag and make it mature-sex and put in some hot lesbian action. Your readers demand it.
Wow. Such edge.
If this doesn't get them in the mood, I don't know what will.
If only this was stallion x stallion.
Ah, and the autist runs across a word unfamiliar to her.
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Literally, from the moment she was born, Skylight has had her cutie mark. Shit.
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I know, right? Some mary sue she's turning out to be.
That's the mary sue we've been waiting for!
I love this line. This is exquisitely crafted.
Oh, see, I was about to point out that Applejack may be uneducated, but she's not autistic. It appears Fritter, on the other hoof, is probably the spawn of Applejack and Big Macintosh. Poor Fritter.
Stop right there.
Does Apple Bloom speak in text message now?
Not only does Apple Bloom now speak in text message, she also has clairvoyance. That explains the cutie mark just being a huge eye.
Every. Last. One.
Oh? I thought only a stallion could do that.
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Got a what?
An A+ is high? What kind of grading system do they run in Soviet Equestria?
Very true, she would have hated you if you couldn't do it.
What a liar.
Actually, they're in different classes. Skylight will be nowhere near.
Let's hope she writes a Starshine x Skylight fic tonight and brings it tomorrow. Maybe that sexy mare friend of hers will get the picture.
My first question would have been, "Wait... my autistic daughter can do magic?" We all know how uncommon that is.
Okay, review time!
This goes leaps and bounds into disability awareness. It shows that even an autistic pony like Starshine can still manage to survive in modern society, albeit with some huge struggles. This is probably the most believable story of an autistic pony that I've ever read. Props to you for being able to bring this character to life, czaert234. I look forward to seeing her future struggles with her disability and how she manages to overcome these limitations in the future.
4301313 *Slow Clap*
You sir are amazing