• Member Since 13th Sep, 2013
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RedRioteer


Just a sociopath with an unheathly love for flames, gaming, and ponies. I'm probably not mentally fit to drive . . . but I'm still a pizza boy!!

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Applebloom, a full grown mare, wonders who her parents are, but a better question is: Why is this the first time she's ever thought of them?

She can't remember anything, nothing at all. She alive, so she must've at least had parents, right?
The only thing she can remember... is a horrible guilt.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Well this is interesting! I have to say that I'm really liking this narrative. Please continue:twilightsmile:

Well, make sure to kill that guy as brutally and painfully as possible.:pinkiecrazy:

Ahhhhh!!! Grammar!! Spelling!!! Otherwise I finally know what's sucking your time away and I'm actually happy. Great story! Loving it so far and that cliff-hanger....

4686413 When I wrote those short stories, it was because I was out of ideas for "An Odd New Friend". Well, out of not-so-dumb ideas to be completely truthful. And sorry to break it to you, but I don't plan on finishing this one out of lack of ambition.

But if you like this story, I'd suggest reading the other two short stories; I think they're a bit better than this.

4690955 Cupcakes... *cringe* I'll read your stories anyway simply because I enjoy everything you write. Besides all that, if you're not writing cus you don't think your ideas are good then don't write! If rather wait 15 days and have a good plot than wait 5 days and have a not-so good plot.

4691180 that was kinda the idea.
oh, and if you don't like gore, don't bother with the cupcakes story.
Seriously, I designed/intended that one to cause somepony nightmares or a puking session.

4691211 Haha I actually like gore, but more of the "injury" type stuff that happens as just an injury. I can deal with intentional harm but only if whoever got hurt of purpose doesn't die. I don't think I'll ever like cupcakes.

P.s. Sad/tragedy fics are my favourite!

4691259 well, nopony's dead yet, if that makes any difference, but I say "nopony" in a more literal sense now...

4691288 "literal sense" oh boy...

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