• Member Since 13th Sep, 2013
  • offline last seen Sep 30th, 2015

RedRioteer


Just a sociopath with an unheathly love for flames, gaming, and ponies. I'm probably not mentally fit to drive . . . but I'm still a pizza boy!!

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A little colt recalls what its like to have everything suddenly taken away from him.

It was going to be an epilogue to a story I'm never going to write, so I just turned it into a one-shot.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

kk m8. bcus ders no one else saying stuff about this storee, alwo me to have the plesure.

persinallee, i enjoyed it A BIT. u could've had a better story or something, but i noly see errors and some grammar ones as well. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) not bad in the end, but not good. it was just one that joined teh many miilions of other stories tht dont seem to stand out. irdk m8, but thts just my opinions.

4/8, decently gr8 m8.

5364246 meh, I just got bored one night. started writing it at midnight and submitted it at around 0300.
i didn't expect any better responses anyway.

seems at least one guy liked it, so, I'm happy with that

5365239 oi m8 u hav psn? i hav som kool hax for mw1 u mite like srsly m90

5367278 srry, i play xbox and pc. plus i do my own hacking for pc

5369024 oi m8 ill be joinin pc soon.

You'll be able to find me on Chivalry, if you have it at all.

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