• Member Since 10th Jul, 2011
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A Hitman Crossover.


See through the eyes of the perfect Equestrian assassin - known only as 47 - as he engages in dark tasks one would not expect to exist in such a world.

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Quite enjoyable, with a perfectly portrayed feel of the hitman games. Pity that something so hard to achieve has no comments so far.

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A very enjoyable read, and it kept the Hitman feel to it. A nice ending, too. Although, it did 'break' the character 47 when he ponders on how people would find it hard for a pony to do things like this, or remarking on how "Unlike in your world, we have no firearms in Equestria.".
And by 'Break' I mean, break immersion. Like the character knew about the 4th wall and the existence of a different world watching him. But that's really all the plot problems I found. Didn't notice any story-breaking grammar or spelling issues, so that's great.
Alas, I must ask... Any plans on a sequel? Maybe involving the main cast, that'd be fun. :pinkiecrazy:

How entertaining... One of the very first stories on the site... Possibly, the literal first... could this be why a dead account such as this is part of the staff? And did this SPARK the "no meta stories" rule, only to be ignited by NTSTS? Hell, from my observations, this story contains a story of its own, yet to be figured out for two years.

GGood story

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