A pink unicorn mare runs into a mysterious scroll someone dropped on her way to take Nature Notes about the Canterlot Gardens. In the center of the page is a strange, sharp design. But that's not all there is to the scroll. Because it's a letter. From one villain to another. Trixie was just hanging out with her guards pony friend and Derpy just wanted to play with Dinky after work. It wasn't fair for this to happen now- but it wasn't fair for this to happen at all.
(cover is from Google Images as of right now. UPDATED DESC.)
Chapters (6)
Very rushed and fast-paced - it's hard to keep track of what's going on, and there's very little description to really set the scenes. Though it does a good job of establishing how fast and senseless the initial attack was (Did Rainbow Dash just Rainboom Canterlot? And kill Dinky?), later scenes could do with a lot more careful pacing.
That said, it's an interesting story and an unconventional team of protagonists, and it intrigues me. I'll follow it and see what happens.
Well what happens is, the whole scroll that Sparkler finds is a letter from Sombra to Chrysalis giving her a spell to copy the abilities of ponies. So basically she makes a bunch changelings become Rainbow Dash and rainboom the castle. Sorry if it wasn't clear, I'll try to see if i can fix that. It's honestly just mistakes on my part
but hopefully i can eventually get things fixed.