Ripped from my world? Check. Forced into a incredible powerfull, incredible evil looking body? Double check! No idea what happend to me, how I am supoosed to get back home or let alone survive? Tripple check. Okay, watch out Equestria, here I come!
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Nice one!
7445833
Thank ya kindley. I immensley enjoed writting this. Having Umbra meet a Displaced she wants to downright murder felt very refreshing.^^
Ugh! I am conflicted.
Gannon is clearly evil, while his methods differ he is just another Sombra building a slave nation.
So please win equestria right?
Except they know he's using mind control on the ponies, yet during their march the leader told them to murder the civilians and rape the women.
So who should I be routing for?!
Umbra, please burn everything down on your way out.
7446036
There is no clear line here. Ganon is clearly a manipulative jerkwad who gladly manipulates inexpierence teenage girls to be his shocktroops but the Equestrians are no goodey-four-hooves by far. Valiant told his soldiers to mutiliate AND rape Jackie, the human girl, to a pulp as revenge for killing their brothers in arms. Such a dickmove, so no wonder he ended up as a bunch of coal and ashes.
I guess the best way is to just cross your fingers and hope for the best.
Umbra: If she would only let me but I´ll try my very best.
7446049
True but:
That line opens up murdering the civvies, especially as he called them rebels and not soldiers, and once you combine that with the proclimation of gang raping one of them...
I don't know about hoping for the best, clensing fire maybe...
/EDIT Maybe we can bribe Umbra with Dungeon Keeper or Black and White powers?
7446059
Never denied that.
Hehe, cleansing fire, now you made me wish Umbra was displaced as a Warhammer 40k witchhunter. Allthough, Umbra with accesss to planet killing orbital bombardements...*shudders*
7446066
I totally support exterminatus status on this equestria.
7446059 Overlady with dungeon keeper powers?
Oh hell yes!
7446059
7446173
Umbra: *drools at the thought of the Iron Maidens*
No, bad Umbra, bad! Great you two, now I need to get the hose again.
Umbra: Worth it!*gets hosed*
7446189 Is that from Dungeon Keeper 1? Cause I've only played the second with any regularity.
7446327
Yeah, I guess since I only ever played DG 1. Iron Maidens are, what a surprise, woman in thight, black leather full bodysuits with lots of straps and belts and armed with sharp steel claws. To motivate them, you could strap them on your torture devices, about which they where, well, quite ecstatic.
7446368 Do you mean the Dark Mistresses?
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7446380
Yes, those. They where called Iron Maidens over here tho.^^°
7446382 Yeah, I feel that would be Umbra's preferred non kobolt minion. Maybe some Dark Angels and a Horned Reaper or two.
Apologies if my knowledge seems lacking. Most of my knowledge of the first game comes from a certain fanfiction with sailor mercury.
7446389
No prob and do I even want to know?^^
7446451 It's actually really good. It's called Dungeon Keeper Ami.
I can't wait to see how this story turns out and to see how evil Umbra gets.
Damn.
7446510
Hmm, might be worth a read then.^^
7446946
You might want to grab a parachute for when the slope turns into a freefall and a raincoat because the first few rows will sink like the Titanic.
7447049
Damn indeed. And you know of course, after 'Damn' comes 'Damnation'.
7446510 there's also a fan made game called "War for the Overworld " i think that you would like it.
7447105 I have.
*whistles* Dang, I almost thought Jackie was going to be a bit more permanent. This has been quite the development.
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Well, Jackie´s shadow will linger in Umbra´s Verse for quite some time, rest assured and in the unspecific future, Jackie will defs make a comeback. Just wait for the next chapter and you will see.^^
Wish I had caught this story earlier so I could have begged that she start introducing herself as Darkwing Duck or something.
Welp, I'm out of patience for crossovers, especially since this is turning into one of those fics that seem to exist just for the purpose of such.
7457975
I am sorry if my story did not life up to your expectations, I hope you at least somewhat enjoyed it to this point. Yes I admit, the whole Renegade arc was quite a bit more excessive than we planned to but after the next chapter, Umbra will continue on her own for at least three chapters.
7458257 Any one of the crossovers you did would have been fine. Even the renegade arc, with as much as it dragged on. The problem you, and MOST Displaced authors seem to face, however, is recognizing that over the course of your story you are introducing and emotionally attaching the readers to the events of one setting and set of characters, hijacking the plot to unrelated things over and over again is like interrupting the original Teen Titans series with episodes of Teen Titans Go every now and then. On occasion, fine, comic relief, tension reducer, whatever. Might even be a good bit of character developing fluff. But doing it CONSTANTLY, like you are, is a great way to make people just stop giving a flying flip. Crossovers between stories like this that drag on for an entire chapter are a great way for at least one of these stories to lose a chapter's worth of content that the readers are actually interested in.
7458266
I see what you mean. Thank you for your honest words, kinda need them sometimes when I loose sight of the bigger picture that should be my story.
7471317 Ah. lol ^^ Still, what timing for it, eh? XD (And we still never got to chat, eh? Things have no doubt been busy for ya. XD)
Nearly caught up now.^_^ Been proving interesting, eh? It seems the more Umbra peers into evil, the less she wants to be part of it.
Now I finally understand what the real meaning was behind the ‘do Cadance” line.
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Innuendos for everyone!^^