Ripped from my world? Check. Forced into a incredible powerfull, incredible evil looking body? Double check! No idea what happend to me, how I am supoosed to get back home or let alone survive? Tripple check. Okay, watch out Equestria, here I come!
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Good chapter but i have one plot hole that wont leave me alone.
(Plot hole trys to bear hug me)
Umbar said she was wanted and had bounty hunters on her ass, but in non of the past chapters show that she was or why. The only one i can think of is darling do but she wouldn't because it can lead to ponys finding out her books are on true events.
if anyone can tell me what happend i will be sooooo happy to get this plot hole off me
(Plot hole getting bigger and starting to look like japan anime monster)
Plz herrllllllYYYYYYYYYY AAAAWWWWWWWWW IT GOT ME!!!!!!
Not the mace
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There is a bounty, yes, so my girl simply assumes there are bounty hunters looking for her everywhere. So far, it is more like a ordinary wanted poster. That is not to say that on one point of the story, some bounty hunters will indeed rear their mugs.
As for Daring, she is no real bounty hunter but she will very likley show up in some way again.
An Overlord who likes baby seals? Don't let the minions find out...
Quite like this Jackie fellow. True, need to watch out for actually eating sapient life, moral ramifications aside, we do tend to havie lots of nasty side effects when eaten, but other than that, it's rather refreshing to read about someone who kills would be murderers rather than choosing to lay down and die out of some twisted sense of moral relativism or listening to someone play the what-if game after the fact and taking them seriously. Here's hoping some of that rubs off on the Overlady.
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Iknowrite? Trust me when I say, there will be quite some rubbing (and NO not the sexy kind!) going both ways.
Also, if you like Jaqueline, you should really go and check out "The heartless Renegade" by ArreClonClipo and see Jackies various (mis)adventures in her version of ponyland. No spoilers here, but it will be glorious!
7394151 Read it myself and I honestly don't blame her for doing what she did but there is such thing as taking it too far.
Another great chapter, and a lot of bad proofreading areas. I see a common theme of misusing 'where' and 'were' among such as well.
What story is Jackie from?
A disturbing attitude towards Equis population. I can understand the 'do what you have to do ' to survive but Jacky gets herself killed or stoned with her ' i dont care' mindset.
Hypocritic? In self defense yes, but Jacky misses the point. Especially if she do anything its the Overlady verse that suffers. Situation and self awareness are key.
Great chapter.
Wonder what trouble Jacky gets Umbra in...
Whats Jackys skillset and abilitys?