I do my best to be as unique as I can be with my clop, and I just love stories being an integral part. The feels will increase in the next chapter, just you wait.
It's not meant to be the mystery of mysteries. Actually, the audience knowing while the characters don't makes it all the more tragic because we can watch the characters blithely traipse along while approaching the inevitable climax.
Love and duty in a war. That's a battle for the ages.
Sex maniac Pinkie is now my head cannon. Would you believe me if I said that I read this for the story not the clop? Seems like Mane-iac is planning something, she's not only a psycho and famous stylist, or was, anyway with many hair related skills but also a good actress. Nice to see her more than a psycho who is evil, knows it and enjoys every moment of it. Scene she no longer has her hair tendrils, she's having to adjust. She's made a nice anti-heroine once her hair grows back if she is reformed, she my be good, but by no means as nice as the Power Ponies. like Piccolo and Vegeta compared to the Z Fighters.
Actually, there's some question if she's still psycho. She's done therapy and takes meds. According to things she's doing well in her program. She has mental clairty but that doesn't seem to have made her happy. But still, she does have moments of kindness.
I'm somglad you like this for the story. I write it for that. The sex is pleasant but the point is th. Story about what that sex means. This applies especially to the interspecies romances (Jo and Marvy; Hum Drum and Mane-iac; Sidero and Saddle; Jarl and Radiance.) As well, said interspecies relationships turn on what the outsiders are (paroled villain and mother, mercenaries, even a normal, non-super guy.) There's a lot going on, culture-wise on top of it all.
Just realized something! Where is Hum Dum's backstory?! No one talks about how he even got together with the Power Ponies or his life before he was with them.
Is that something you might be willing to add? Would be nice.
Scheming, feels and sex and gang banging? Don't see all that in one chapter very often.
Wonder if Hum Dum will figure out why Mane-iac really like his 'cum showers'? I so hope so.
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I do my best to be as unique as I can be with my clop, and I just love stories being an integral part. The feels will increase in the next chapter, just you wait.
4739294 Good to know.
Here being hopeful they increase on a positive.
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It's not meant to be the mystery of mysteries. Actually, the audience knowing while the characters don't makes it all the more tragic because we can watch the characters blithely traipse along while approaching the inevitable climax.
Love and duty in a war. That's a battle for the ages.
I hope Mane-iac will be redeemed in the end by Hum Drum
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You'll just have to wait and see. :Raritywink:
The round rag around the room. The sound rang around the room. ?
you do collapse me to can. you do collapse me you can.
had bug squeezing. had by squeezing.
cheery party nut. cheery party night.
room, with a metal. room with a metal.
and suckles. and suckle.
ail. tail.
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Considering Gabe, the world might end if it didn't.
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Actually, "cheery party nut" is right. It's her self-description.
Any particular comments?
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Actually, "cheery party nut" is right. It's her self-description.
Any particular comments?
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Sex maniac Pinkie is now my head cannon. Would you believe me if I said that I read this for the story not the clop? Seems like Mane-iac is planning something, she's not only a psycho and famous stylist, or was, anyway with many hair related skills but also a good actress. Nice to see her more than a psycho who is evil, knows it and enjoys every moment of it. Scene she no longer has her hair tendrils, she's having to adjust. She's made a nice anti-heroine once her hair grows back if she is reformed, she my be good, but by no means as nice as the Power Ponies. like Piccolo and Vegeta compared to the Z Fighters.
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I can see it now.
The only comment I could make would be 'Don't be evil, idiots'.
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Actually, there's some question if she's still psycho. She's done therapy and takes meds. According to things she's doing well in her program. She has mental clairty but that doesn't seem to have made her happy. But still, she does have moments of kindness.
I'm somglad you like this for the story. I write it for that. The sex is pleasant but the point is th. Story about what that sex means. This applies especially to the interspecies romances (Jo and Marvy; Hum Drum and Mane-iac; Sidero and Saddle; Jarl and Radiance.) As well, said interspecies relationships turn on what the outsiders are (paroled villain and mother, mercenaries, even a normal, non-super guy.) There's a lot going on, culture-wise on top of it all.
Hope you enjoy the denoument which is coming.
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If like was that easy, we'd all be socialists. Heh. I hope you enjoy this little foray into story-saturated clop.
Just realized something! Where is Hum Dum's backstory?! No one talks about how he even got together with the Power Ponies or his life before he was with them.
Is that something you might be willing to add? Would be nice.
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In some sense the general backstories of most of the Power Ponies don't matter as much as how they are interacting now. Only Mare-velous matters, because of her marriage. Hum Drum's backstory isn't quite as important as his current role as mediator and loving fiancé.
4817545 Ok. I'll by that. For now.
Please continue!