I'm really disappointed with how you utilize these mercs; specifically, how you have Rager and Radiance just falling right over them. You may as well have the two super heroine's be in heat for how they immediately swoon over these guys. I understand that this is suppose to be referencing the relationships between the corresponding characters in your "Iron Will" series, but reminding us of that series is the problem: we remember the fantastic relationships you took time to build in your past stories. You've given the impression that these Power Pony stories aren't meant to be taken super-seriously, but I still read these hoping for better crafted tales from you. I'm not even into clopfics, but I still gladly count myself as a follower of yours, due to the great stories you make, and how you make intimate scenes an integral part of them.
Poor Hum Drum. Guy's getting set up for some major heart break unless Mane-iac has an actual turn around...
I'm really disappointed with how you utilize these mercs; specifically, how you have Rager and Radiance just falling right over them. You may as well have the two super heroine's be in heat for how they immediately swoon over these guys. I understand that this is suppose to be referencing the relationships between the corresponding characters in your "Iron Will" series, but reminding us of that series is the problem: we remember the fantastic relationships you took time to build in your past stories. You've given the impression that these Power Pony stories aren't meant to be taken super-seriously, but I still read these hoping for better crafted tales from you. I'm not even into clopfics, but I still gladly count myself as a follower of yours, due to the great stories you make, and how you make intimate scenes an integral part of them.
Love it! Love all of this so much.
Get your mare Hum Dum, and make your family complete!
freed form. freed from.
Just don't urinate all over the city to prove a point. I'm pretty sure she does that anyway, just drunk.
the told. they told.