Well thank you for the repeated punches in the stomach and genitals, and the knowledge that all my effort has been wasted. I only partly mean that. You were a bit cruel about it. That comment about being disappointed is the fastest way to make an artist of any type feel like their throat is being cut.
As for the "speed", it's explained in the description. The story is moving rapidly because the "reader" is flipping through the comic. Much of the courtship has been skimmed, what little was actually shown in the comic. I know you want more but think of the limitation of the medium. This is a doujin, focused on the sex parts mostly. It's really more like a combination of a doujin and contrived mid-90's tease comics like Shanda the Panda and Katmandu.
Plus, it's a first date. It took a while to build up to that. You will also find as the story goes on that this is just a crush as far as strength and seriousness goes. There is a lot of depth coming. I'll just tell you a spoiler, there's a reason Diamond was described with a sliver of an accent, and Iron had to hide his attire.
I have to root for HumDrum too. It seems to me that practically his livelihood and basically his sanity is all on whether he can control Maniac and if Maneiac is willing to put some things aside for their daughter. Either one of them is broken, you've lost a Power Pony literally and figurately, and it's gonna be deeper and damaging than basically the Power Ponies saying "We told you so, she's no good for you!"
A suggestion: The metal walls were painted a calming blue color, hung with posters and paintings of animals and nature scenes. This way you reduce your repetitive and use and improve flow at the same time.
I don't often d'aww at sex, but when I do...
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Which one? Happy Hum Drum or hyper muscle Iron and Saddle.
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That is one of the big conflicts. Her motivation comes into sharper focus later.
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Well thank you for the repeated punches in the stomach and genitals, and the knowledge that all my effort has been wasted. I only partly mean that. You were a bit cruel about it. That comment about being disappointed is the fastest way to make an artist of any type feel like their throat is being cut.
As for the "speed", it's explained in the description. The story is moving rapidly because the "reader" is flipping through the comic. Much of the courtship has been skimmed, what little was actually shown in the comic. I know you want more but think of the limitation of the medium. This is a doujin, focused on the sex parts mostly. It's really more like a combination of a doujin and contrived mid-90's tease comics like Shanda the Panda and Katmandu.
Plus, it's a first date. It took a while to build up to that. You will also find as the story goes on that this is just a crush as far as strength and seriousness goes. There is a lot of depth coming. I'll just tell you a spoiler, there's a reason Diamond was described with a sliver of an accent, and Iron had to hide his attire.
4498293 Iron Willie/Saddle Rager
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Heh. Thank you. It seems I stil have some talent with some version of these characters.
4503297
He really, really wants them to form a perfect family unit. Time will tell how successful or unsuccessful he is.
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I have to root for HumDrum too. It seems to me that practically his livelihood and basically his sanity is all on whether he can control Maniac and if Maneiac is willing to put some things aside for their daughter. Either one of them is broken, you've lost a Power Pony literally and figurately, and it's gonna be deeper and damaging than basically the Power Ponies saying "We told you so, she's no good for you!"
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That is very true. They have a very unique relationship and it's quite a balancing act. It's just good they have Sassy.
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Hehe. You might be right.
Glad you got to these.
I might hanging. I mind hanging.
shopped. chopped.
Like really. Life really.
A suggestion: The metal walls were painted a calming blue color, hung with posters and paintings of animals and nature scenes.
This way you reduce your repetitive and use and improve flow at the same time.
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Been busy with other stories and games. My favorites page tends to move on pretty quickly if I miss something.
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I'll get to it quickly.
I have new work coming. I'm doing another Twixinkilda. But as my journals have indicated I'm doing a lot more with the Etiamsi series.
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Who is this "he", you speak of? The art looks familiar but I can't place the name.
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I don't know his name in most places but he goes by DaGoddamnBatguy. Or similar.
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Ah, thanks. Knew it looked familiar.
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Atbleast these mercs have some semblance of empathy.