Rainbow Dash has never wanted anything else so badly as much as she just wants it all just to end.
This is just a short story i attempted to write in half an hour. Since I've been focusing on my exams, i haven't had a chance to write anything and it's been burning away at me! So, at quarter past midnight, i started this. Don't hate. I would really appreciate it if you didn't dislike my story simply because i don't see the point in it. Rather than going "fuq dis shiet!" and disliking the story, how about you tell me what it was you disliked about it, so then i know how i can improve my writing. Thank you!
WARNING: story contains thoughts of suicide and suggestion of self-harm
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I liked it despite the depressing, broken hearted air about it. There were a few small wording issues I had here and there.
I feel that could be worded little better.
I personally would add She to the start of that sentence, but that's me.
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Last quip I had was that sitting would probably work better there for overall flow.
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Wow for such a short story it really managed to hit me in the feels. Either that or my hormones are acting up, eh. Overall excellent work, a few wording errors, but you managed to pull it off. Self harm and suicide fics tend to hard to pull off without sounding cliche, however, you did find a decent middle ground with it so liked and a fav.
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thank you! looking back at it, i agree that some parts could've been worded better. My excuse? It was late, I couldn't concentrate *whinewhinewhine* 
thanks for pointing them out!
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Thank you so very much!
4242255 five people who have no soul.
I'm just noting that my like is for the story not the content... As in its for how it was written rather than what it was written about.
You're gonna get a lot of dislikes for the content, despite the numerous warnings you put up, witch is both unfortunate and a little stupid.
Oh, and I so called it. I knew Twi was dead. But that's beside the point.
This fic was well written, the premise was solid and the ideas were sound. Characterization was about as spot-on as it could be in this situation, and it's all around a heartbreaking story of love loss and suicide.... that should so be a name of a book.... but I digress.
I have nothing more to say, other than it made me think, which is rather impressive in its own right.
4243524 Yeah i agree...
Thank you for the feedback, i really appreciate it!
4242516 As always, You're welcome!
Wow! Great story! How did you do this in a half hour????? I am amazed!;) nice job!
Well done. I know that this subject is hard to write but I feel you conveyed the subject matter quite well. Your use of imagery was very well written.
I loved it
Is it weird that rather than feel depressed by the suicide and dark themes, I felt happy because of the romance underneath?
Also, the date specified actually IS a Wednesday.
4401303 no that's how i feel when i read stories like this! Hence why i wrote one trying to get the same result! I'm glad i did
haha, seriously!? 
i must be psychic! 
I teared up a bit, Beautiful.
Holy-! That was a good story! And I hate tragedy! Great job!
I'M CONFUSED