Rarity's Rescue

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NikitaKitten

NikitaKitten #1 · Apr 8th, 2014 · 1 · · Chapter 8 ·

Huh. That was an interesting ride. The first half made me hate your guts. No one hurts Rarity. No one. Then the second half came and made up for that, sorta. The scenes with genuine interaction between Rarity and Shining Armor were nice, but that's also when the story started reading more like an outline for a story than an actual finished narrative. Also, the sex scenes were very clinical. I'm pretty sure the word "genitals" should never appear in this sort of story. If only because it makes me think of this song:

RarestRarity1779

RarestRarity1779 #2 · Apr 9th, 2014 · 3 · · Chapter 8 ·

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Yeah, I know it sucks The person who requested it though was super impatient and, quite frankly, an ass if you will, so I just hurried along with it.

ElectroShock237

ElectroShock237 #3 · Apr 11th, 2014 · · · Chapter 4 ·

All throughout the 1-3 chapters I was crying inside and then it was like a frickin relief! In a hospital. Not with the double Ds. Safe. And Shining Armor in there. Perfect.

Destun Torrachen

Destun Torrachen #4 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Good story...FIRST!!! Sorry, I have always wanted to do that.

ElectroShock237

ElectroShock237 #5 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 6 ·

Chapter6 is really cute. That's all.

ElectroShock237

ElectroShock237 #6 · Apr 12th, 2014 · · · Chapter 7 ·

"Meet me at the library, " as the last five words in the second to last chapter in a clopfic that still really hasnt had much intimate relations. I wonder whats gonna happen....

ElectroShock237