Snowfall is fun loving pegasus with her six friends. Cherry pop. Dream cloud.Sky stamp.Starshine.Twinkle.Strawberry blush and Mecha.She gets into a lot of trouble.But on the first day back for Ponyville high.Snowy falls for a pegasus called Heartsong.Soon falling in love together.
Snow discovers that Heartsong has been cheating on her this whole time.
Frustrated Snowy takes a Walk (fly) soon finding friendship with a cross breed dragon pony known by the name Gem
A dragon pony called Gem, I wonder who its parents are...
384922 You know i was wondering when somepony was gunna ask that..No its not Rarity and Spike >>
Awww wow this is just too cute!!!! i love it already
WRITE MORE OR YOU WILL EXPLODE!.
Oh and have a happy holiday.
hey maybe Cherry pop could have a kid or something!
385218 Thanks for the idea!!!
I like what you have so far and am interested to see it develop. You have a very good idea and a very fun introduction.
One complaint: could you be a bit more descriptive of your characters? Having the picture of them goes a long way (which I love!), but a 2-3 sentence description when they are introduced, maybe with a little how and why of their appearance/personality/history would help the reader relate to them more.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
386619 ok I might in. Chapter 2 but I could. Easily edit chapter. 1
Before I even read this, I would like to say that you are the first person I have seen on this site that uses good colors for their OCs. Why the hell does everyone make their OCs freaking neon?!