Just a guy from Northern Germany who likes pony fiction.
Rainbow Dash was perfectly happy with her life as a pirate. She had a FTL-capable battle cruiser, a mostly loyal crew that didn't try to kill her in the last three months and a hole bunch of money, but than she had to steal this strange alien artifact.
Now she is stuck together with her former friend and present enemy Applejack while the hole world is trying to kill them.
Crossover-tag because parts of the setting are inspired by the game Freelancer.
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Im intrigued.
Please, continue.
You are awesome for bringing a reference from that awesome game my good sir! Also one question are we going to learn more about the other Mane 6 as we progress?
4239762 Shame that they stopped the development of a sequel to Bulletstorm. This game was just awesome.
At the moment I'm thinking about a way to include the other mane six but I'm afraid that I might have not enough to do for them because I also plan some additional original characters.
4242438 It's cool if you don't just thought I would bring it up and WHAT?! THEY CANCELLED PRODUCTION FOR A SEQUEL?!
4242559 Yeah, the game didn't sell very good and because they belong somehow to Epic Games they had to do Gears of War Judgement (I'm a huge GoW-fan but this game just sucked) instead of Bulletstorm 2.
"Twilight in her position as princess once offered Applejack a job in her part of the equestrian empire bot she declined it." I think you mean but, not bot
"Cleaver take my gun." There’s a comma missing.
I also got some wrong interpunctuation in the second chapter: "See you later.." with two periods and "Itching to bring all these guys to justice?." with a question mark and a period.
Except from that, so far so good. I’ll read the rest.
5496144 Thanks for the hint. I fixed the mistakes. If you find more, feel free to tell me.
RUN DASH RUN!
I have to say I don’t quite like how the story is developing. In the beginning it was about Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo being space pirates, which was great, but now your OC has stolen the spotlight. It’s still okay, but I liked the original concept from the first chapter better.
Hmm, I kinda agree with Gial here. Them humans just went and stole RD´s thunder. I mean, having humans as a ancient, cybernetic and shapeshifting race and some strange Reaper-like race warring against them since like ever is fine and dandy but I can´t shake of the feeling that it gets rather far away from the beginnings of the story.
Well, I will just wait and see.