You have no idea how long i have waited for part 3, i read the first two, and was ravenous for more.  I have yet to find anything as comedic yet serious as this and I dont know if i can go 10 or more weeks without more!

And I, hereby, name this spell: DRUNKPORTING! Seriously, keep writing like this. It's hilarious.

Glad to have this here, DA's such a pain to keep track of.

Yay, another great story.

Looking forward to more.

Yay, I remember this from Deviantart, and now it's HERE!

Good excuse to reread it.

Oh my god yes i've read this in DA but this will be much better in here since i'll know easily when gets updated, cant awit for the 3rd chapter since i've read both of the previous chapters lol, well keep up your awesome work, fav and watching you

Thanks guys, glad you're enjoying it!

I'll put the other two parts up here over the next couple of days.

Stoned and Drunk (Live) - Black Label Society

>>384042384042

I was thinking Tipsiporting, but that's okay.

this is the first fan fic that i ever read. Then i became a fan fiction -aholic

...meh. I'll give it a like.

Needs more of

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>>384194384194

MWAHAHAHAHAHA!  Success!

I cant wait for part three! Do hurry along and get it posted!

I absolutely love this story so far - I, like the others, have read it (to Part 2) on DA, first. Very glad to see it here!

I really hope this gets in the featured box. Something about inebriated miniature ponies is just gut-bustingly hilarious and this story cranks the fun dial right up to 11.

About to read Part 3!

Hoo boy, now I'm craving a glass of some good brandy. Thanks a lot...

So glad to see this story here. I got done reading the third part a few hours on dA and enjoyed it immensely, along with the other two chapters. You put together quite the fun story here.

Well... I know the pain. And I'm gonna feel it again on Sunday 'cause of party tomorrow... YAY!

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I love it and it makes perfect sense too.

/win

That's really all there is to say on the subject.

Wow, this is.. great writing.......

This is one of the best fanfics for MLP, and one of the few to include drinking without going overboard. I really liked it when I read it on Gdocs and I'm glad you've brought it here.

Good stuff, man, just good stuff.

Whoo hoo! So happy I can read and can track of this here rather than over at deviantArt. Yay!

Drunk ponies!

i loled hope to see the next chapters

I'm reminded of that drunk science flash mixed with The Hangover.

Well done.

I just realized something. Drunk Twilight means chaotic, uncontrolled spells. Who uses chaotic, uncontrollable magic? DISCORD.

Bring on the comedy! Normally I have to rely on comic strips from EQD to get my daily dose of pony humor. It's exciting to see something a lot more substantial come out that's just as funny, if not more so. Keep it up man, you've got the right thing going here. I've had the blackout-drunk experience once or twice, so this really just snags me.

I'll be sure to send you a more in depth review when I have the time, if you would like. Just let me know.

Regards,

Razorbeam.

>>385399385399

Sure!  I'd love to hear what you thought of this!

Thank you everyone so much for the comments; I'm really glad y'all enjoyed it!

I'll be putting Part 2 up shortly and then Part 3 a little later.

Yay, next part is up! Really funny; can't wait for the next part.

Also, first.

Looks like rough times ahead for Big Mac  

Can I haz moar?

While there's some parts of the story I don't necessarily agree with (Applejack being relatively quick to anger, and Macintosh being shy), it's nonetheless an entertaining read.

status report, fanfic #348 - AN(TT)TR

this one is certainly good enough to fit the comedy section, really enjoy the "twilight's OPness overthrows even drunkenness" angle.

this is my first status report, and I plan to have at least 3 more.

Very nice, and riotously funny! Can't wait for part three!

Glad to see it here. Instantly favourited and positively rated - a cracking 'drunken pony' tale.

Oh, this oughta be good.

Nice Red vs Blue quote good sir, are you a fan of the series?

>>385607385607

"Is that a bad thing?"

"Is what a bad thing?"

"You're memory getting shut off."

"Who shut off my memory?"

"You did."

"Did what?"

"Shut off your memory."

"Why do you want me to shut off my memory?"

"No, it's already off."

"What is?"

"You're memory"

"I can't fucking believe I have two of them now..."

Some form of that conversation is in this chapter. Easily one of the funniest RvB scenes ever...of all time.

>>385654385654

You should give my crossover fic a try, you might like it

Anyways both my comments were off topic.

Zaptiftun, you have an awesome story here good sir and I am now following you on deviant art as well.

Heeeey awesome to see this here too. So much easier to "collect" stories here than using bookmarks on EqD or Favorites on DA.

>>385530385530

It's more for comedic effect. Mild caricaturization to emphasize the personality traits that make the jokes in the story work.

>>385530385530

You bring up valid points, but I think they can be excused considering that AJ here is suffering from a hangover and in "Hearts and Hooves Day" Applebloom says that he is a bit shy.  Perhaps I'm grasping at straws here, but that my thought process for it.  Thank you so much for your thoughts on it! (By the way, love your fics)

>>385607385607

I am, in fact, and that's where the inspiration for drunk Pinkie came from.  Thanks for commenting and reminding me to catch up on your fic.

Must have MOARZ!! This is too funny!

This is damn hilarious. I never thought what my favorite ponies would be like drunk,

but their even better!

And I'm a die-hard RvB fan. I caught those references a mile away

and they were genius!

I can't wait for part 3, I sense fluttershy maaaaay have gotten a bit too comfortable with Big Mac. Oh Boy

This is so incredibly funny, I lurvz it!

BTW, I loved the Red vs. Blue reference; Drunk Pinkie = Caboose.

>>385097385097

And I'm hungry for more! I'm off to the next one!

We require more chapters. Been waiting for an update to this one FOREVER!

Pinkie pursed her lips in hard thought for a moment before speaking again with a supportive smile, "You are a good person and ponies say nice things about you."

lulz

"'Timeline'?  Time doesn't travel in lines, it travels in circles and that's why clocks are round."

OMG, that makes INCREDIBLE SENSE!!! Or maybe I just haven't had liqueur in too long and my own booze is affecting me.

This is the first fanfic I ever read (eqDaily) When i saw it featured i clicked over instantly and favorited, Thanks for provoking my love of fanfics, if it werent for you i would have never got into them

Yes, RvB references!

RVB and brain slugs

BRAIN SLUG!! had to be my favourite part. Keep it up!

OK I love this story other than the fact Luna keeps saying "celly" because in all other books I read they say "tia" but other than that I love this story

"Hi orange blob who's probably Applejack, yellow blob that's Fluttershy, and big red splotch."

LOL

Well, the RVB quotes made my day

btw how do i track this story?! i can't find the track button anymore, and when i try to favorite, it never ever appears in my favorites!

Hahaha this is too damn funny

Whoo love it, love it, love it!

Love every bit of it. Well done.

Thank you for this wonderful story. It was one of the first ones I read when I started getting into FiM fanfiction, and it remains one of my favorites.

Ahah! Gotta love the Big Mac/Fluttershy endings. Great job on this by the way Zap!

"...there needs to be a law against her using those eyes on others."

IM with you there bro lol

excellent chapter as before i read this on DA but i prefer to comment here lol

well really fun story and awesome ending and just as the cherry on top:

“Uh…I like big flanks and I cannot lie?” AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHA

Yes, folks, I'm a big fan or RvB.

Thanks for enjoying and commenting, everypony!

D'awwww.

>>387618387618

Story still reads incomplete?

Planning on an epilogue?

Loved it this time round as much as I did the first time. Thank You.

Now, if you'll excuse me, I wish to try and return to sleep.

I'm glad this story is here now! I can add it to my collection.

Great story.

I especially love the fact that Drunk Fluttershy = Pinkie Pie.

It's extra funny when you realize they share the same voice actress.

>>387618387618 Was there a RvB reference in the story? If there was I totally missed it. Probably because it's been a while since I watched any of it, what with season 10 currently in the works.

Really liked what I saw! Please more chapters!

Big Mac gets all the bitches

I'm very much a Pinkie + Twilight drunk. I have phases of tiredness and silliness.

Cute story, and brings back my own good memories.

Also lost it at Flirter-shy. "Wanna see my cutie mark?" - best line.

Dr Adorable is best pony.

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First:

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Second:

I have a party tonight. I wonder where I'm gonna wake up tomorrow... Last time after party I woke up hugging my friend's fridge with a gas mask on my face. That was... strange. I hope that I'm gonna find the way home... somehow...

Love this story and Big mac is one of my favorite ponies, 2nd in fact.

so here's a montage of awesome pictures of the eldest apple sibling in all his glory.

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Comon you know this is epic right here.

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I feel ya brotha'

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this needs no caption, its just that awesome.

>>385499385499 Your profile pic is my face. Exactly. My Face.

Well that was a nice little story

Haha I loved this. I laughed out loud, and I loved the developement of the the Fluttermac relationship

Daww! That was awesome!

I see what you did there, caboose references...

get teh vodka it gonna be a flutterorgy

This is really cute, would love to see a sequel to show how their relationship works out

Is there going to be a sequel?

Certainly cute, that last chapter. And the entire fic has been very good, I liked it a lot.

The MLP fandom hasa lot of weird ships. I'm proud to say Big Mac x Fluttershy is among the only ones I agree with. Overall, this was a great fic, except you didn't talk about what happened to Rainbow Dash.

I'm usually not one for the shorter stories, but you were able to accomplish  a lot in a short time. Great story.

To borrow a line from Ben Grim of the Fantastic Four. The caption for  Fragger42 's last picture should be.

                     “Its clobbering time!”

>>388820388820 & >>388995388995

There won't be a direct sequel, but there will be continuations in this particular universe.

>>389100389100

Sure I did, back in Part 2.

Nice! Drunk ponies are always funny! I would have liked to see dash while she was still drunk (and conscious) but otherwise perfect! you know what we need? some drunk pony emoticons, the "hangover" pinky just doesn't cut it.

>>385654385654

Second best RvB sceen of all time

i love the homage to caboose about the timelines!I thought I was the only one who would remember something like that.

“Uh…I like big flanks and I cannot lie?” I dunno that might score some points with the Element of Honesty there.and “Would you like to come in for some tea?” "Heck yeah marefriend, get some!"

>>385654385654

what episode is it from? Can't remember.

Dawww

loved the story, great job.

Simple a excellent story that was well done and handled fantastically. So many "drunk pony" fics just fall flat, but this one was handled with a soft touch and with respect to the characters. Well done sir!

ALL OF MY D'AWWWW.

“Impressive…most impressive; I was not aware that such a complicated knot could be accomplished by using a tail.”

“Poor Lucky,” Twilight lamented, “I hope he can grow that back.”

Best lines ever! You leave it to the reader to create their own image of what hapened. I loved that!

OverThought approves. Great story. It would make an interesting episode (too bad its a kids show; no drinking) and I enjoyed every bit. Keep up the good work.

That was fun.  Why did you switch to their original names in the last chapter?