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Ephraim Blue


By the time you see me, its too late. I'm gone and you have perished. Glimpses are hard to come by when seeking the Lone Wolves of the Light

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Pitch Black is not your ordinary, everyday stallion. For starters, he can't exist in sunlight. When ever he does get caught in even the tiniest bit of light from the sun, he vanishes. He comes back once the sun has set.

Nopony knows where he goes. In fact, nopony really notices him much. He always stayed indoors when it was day. However, when it was night and everypony slept, he had most of the run of the town.

That's how life for him went. Hide in day, wander through the streets of Ponyville at night. When Nightmare Moon came and decided to bring everlasting night, he was overjoyed! However, the sun did come back, making him vanish into thin air once again. He still came back the next night, but how is he supposed to live like this? His parents died recently, and the day just seems to drag on, and on, and on...

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4169574 Well, you found the story. I sorta got the name from the story you wrote. Its very similar, but not the same.

Oh, and thanks for liking this story.

I admit, for a story whose title pic was created in pony creator, this is actually interesting.

4169644 Well, I thought a good pic of the OC in the story would give people a more detailed description of him.

Also, I couldn't think of anything else. I only came up with this story today.

I like it, dose he work in golden oaks library? And if so...will twi be coming in?:twilightsmile:

4170098 He takes care of it every other night. This is set before the beginning of season 1.

Never seen an idea like this sounds good so far

wow twilights funny here
she is surprised when he disappeared
he did tell her

"I can't exist in sunlight."
The unicorn stared at him blankly. "That isn't possible."
"Then how am I able to do it?"
"You can't. You're just saying that to give a reasonable excuse to get out of what I might do."
"But I can do it."
"Than prove it."
"I can't."
"Why not?"
"Its not daytime, is it?"
"True, but you're going to stay here until it is."
"Just so that you can prove I can't not exist in sunlight?" he asked her.
"Correct," she replied.
"All right then."
"Really? You'll be willing to cooperate just like that?"
"Sure. There isn't anything else I have to do at this time."
"True,"

common sense twilight

Comment posted by EndlessHarmony deleted Apr 3rd, 2014

4301299 Did you make that just for this story? How thoughtful of you.:pinkiehappy:

Ponyville Library June 19th 9:30 PM

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We had come to inform you that there would be a new guest coming to the town. She will be staying at the library until further notice. She will arrive on the 20th, so we hope that you get this note before then. Until then, you may continue to take care of the library. If of any convenience, we wish that you send us a letter saying that you agree to these terms.

This is a tiny tiny detail but as a pedantic nerd, I'm so glad it's here. So many people place the MLP solstice in the MIDDLE of summer for some reason, and not where it's meant to go.

(Too bad this story is kaput since ancient times, but I'll take my wins where I can get them.)

He starts... never. Sad, this was such a cool concept! Would've loved to see it through.

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