Doctor Whooves: A New Companion

by Tessa

Hello

Doctor Whooves: A New Companion: Chapter 1: Hello

Animalia, Equestria, Ponyville, 2000

Ditzy woke up the next morning her tummy growling. "Muffin time!" She said trotting in to her kitchen to make some muffins. "ENGLISH MUFFINS!?!?!?!?" Ditzy shouted in disgust. "Why do I even have these!?!?!?" She shouted throwing the English muffins in the trash. "Ah here we go! My muffin cook book!" Ditzy said opening the book and making the muffins. Then there was knocking at the door. Ditzy rushed to the door and found her best friend back in Cloudsdale standing on her doorstep.

"Type Writer!?!?" She shouted surprised.

"Hello Derpy." The purple pegasus mare said smiling.

"Oh my gosh it's so great to see you!" Ditzy said hugging Type Writer.

"It's great to see you too." Type Writer said.

"Please come in. I'm making some muffins." Ditzy said.

"I'll be seeing you more now Derpy! I'm moving to Ponyville! The old house is getting too small." Type Writer said.

"That's great! But why would your house in Fillydelphia be too small for only two ponies?" Ditzy said to her friend.

"Well Derpy, wait hold on." Type Writer said. Then she went outside and brought back with her two little fillies. Ditzy gasped after seeing the two fillies.

"Hello I'm Meadow Song." A little purple pegasus filly with a blue mane said.

"And this little cutie is Doodles." Type Writer said showing Ditzy a little unicorn foal.

"Awww. She so cute. She has Rocky's eyes." Ditzy said.

"I help take care of Doodles some times!" Meadow Song said.

"Yes. Meadow is a great big sister." Type Writer said.

"You know. There are some fillies here who are on a quest to find their cutie marks. I'm sure they'd love to have you join if you still need to find yours Meadow." Ditzy said to Meadow.

"Where are they?" She asked.

"Their clubhouse is in Sweet Apple Acres. Though if you see a white unicorn filly with a purple and pink mane, an orange pegasus filly with a pinkie purple mane, or a yellow earth pony with a red mane and a big pink bow, or all three. That's the Cutie Mark Crusaders." Ditzy said. Meadow ran off to go make some new friends.

"So were will you be living?" Ditzy asked her friend.

"On a cloud nearby." Type Writer said.

"What!? But Rocky! He's a unicorn! Only pegasi and Alicorns can walk on clouds and you know that!" Ditzy said pulling the muffins out of the oven.

"Ah but you said a key word. Unicorn. He can use his magic and then he'll be able to live with us on our cloud." Type Writer said. Ditzy sighed as she got down two plates. "Did you see the smoke that was coming from a few miles away?" Type Writer asked.

"No. What smoke? Is anypony hurt?" Ditzy said sitting down after putting a muffin on Type Writer and her plates.

"No. But that's just like you to worry about everypony else Derpy. I admire that." Type Writer said.

"Thank you Type Writer." Ditzy said blushing.

"Your welcome. Thank you for the muffin now I'd best get going." Type Writer said.

"Your welcome too! Bye!" Ditzy said waving good bye to her friend. Ditzy decided to go make sure nopony got hurt. Ditzy spread her wings out so she could fly. "I wonder what it would be like if I were a unicorn." She said to her self. "It would probably be a lot of work to learn the spells. But if something like that did happen I'm sure Twilight would love to help!" Ditzy said before landing next to a crater that the smoke was coming from. Ditzy walked in to the smoke and used her wings to keep the smoke from hurting her. (I had to resist the urge to write: Using her awesome pegasus pony wing power she cleared up the smoke in front of her!)

Ditzy gasped when she saw what was producing the smoke. Her mother's last words ringing in her ears again, Ditzy stepped towards the magic blue box in her mother's stories. Ditzy lightly pushed on the door and stepped inside. There was less smoke in here, but there was still a bit of smoke. Then Ditzy saw a brown earth pony stallion. She rushed over to him just as he became unconscious.

The brown stallion groaned as he woke up. "Umm... Mr. are you ok?" Ditzy asked the brown earth pony.

"What? Oh yes. I'm ok." He replied. "Though I am quite hungry." He said.

"Ok. I'll go make some more muffins!" Ditzy said. She opened up her muffin cook book and looked to see what muffin she had opened up to. "Eeeew! Mint muffins!" Ditzy said. She flipped through the book till she found cherry muffins. She had memorized the recipe, but she never wanted to take her chances with muffins. Once she was done with the muffins the brown earth pony came out and Ditzy gave him and herself a few.

"What it about me that's so fascinating?" Ditzy asked the brown pony.

"Oh! Well you see, it's complicated. I'm from another universe and the planet I was on most wasn't even my home planet! I'm from a planet called Gallifray. But on any planet in my universe there were no Pegasi. They were just legends, The Pegasi I mean. These are delicious what did you use?" He said.

"They're cherry muffins so the normal ingredients and a few secret ones and love. Oh! By the way, I'm Ditzy Do but everypony calls me Derpy Hooves. Hello." Ditzy said.

"Did you say 'Everypony'?" The pony asked.

"Yes." Ditzy replied.

The brown pony laughed a bit then spoke again. "I'm the Doctor. Hello."

Author's Note:

Fun facts! Fact 1: I love cherry muffins! Mmm... yum! Fact 2: I have no idea what English muffins are! Fact 3: Type Writer is me! But older. And I just made up the other characters. Fact 4: A lot of this chapter was rewritten. I started to write it in a journal and after reading it I decided to change it a bit. Fact 5: I HATE MINT!!!!!

Comments

[Inthretis]

Tardis is not spelled with periods like that (T.A.R.D.I.S.) It is spelled TARDIS or Tardis.

So, a self insert that doesn't really do anything, is unobtrusive, and is just there. He's not bad at all, but I recommend you remove that from your author's note so people don't downvote you because of it. People don't like self inserts.

"Mommy will you tell me a story?" Ditzy said. (Oh! Just so you know we are in flashback mode.)

Just get rid of the parentheses and the text inside, it sort of ruins the flow of the story. Maybe italicize the flashback or separate it using line breaks.

Ditzy woke up the next morning her tummy growling.

Improper sentence, maybe add "with" between "morning" and "her".

Meh, it's okay, but this type of story has been done at least a hundred times before on this site alone.

[Tessa]

4201225
Well I've always thought that it was done that way since it stands for Time and relative dimension in space. So yeah. As for the flashback thing. I've tried Googleing how to do flashbacks but I haven't had much success. So I'm not the best with flashbacks.

[Tessa]

4201225
I forgot to say this the first time so I'm gonna say it now. T_T Seriously? I am not amused. If you truly read these stories you would find that, although they are about The Doctor & his pony(fied) companion, each and everyone is special and unique. They are NOT identical copies or even close to having a plot line quite similar to another. I just - Gah! I need to finish watching Pokemon. Have a good day, night, or whatever.

[bloopybloop]

i hate mint love cherry muffins english muffins are basicly cobs i know because im english plus if you need help im here